Wonderful, just... wow. That was quite a journey, I enjoyed that a lot. Tbh, at first, I was skeptical to read a RWBY Pokemon AU, but when I read a lot of rwby stories and theres only a few stories that I havent read yet(and caught my attention) I decided to give it a shot, and Im glad I did read it. You have earned my respect, only several authors managed to do that. You did an amazing work, I love it

I dont know of this was pure talent skill or dedication but whatever it is you got it! I've laughed cried and sighed through this which is a first for me in a fanfic. Kudos to you!

Ive seen 3 gym leaders who remind me of the 1st gen pokemon anime now. Jaune is a bit like misty as not very good. Velvet is like the saffron city leader whos name i cant recall and ren is like brock except its all villagers and not brothers and sisters. Im unsure if you purposefully did this but its awesome.

This story is a hidden gem. The best crossover I have read. You gave every character the development they needed. Every pokemon battle are not even boring I tell you!

The Zoey/Neo arc killed me the most, and the fight between Blake and Ruby was astounding. Even Eevee's decision to evolve is just... *chef kisses*

You may have finished this story long ago, and I'm glad I have found it. I geniunely enjoyed your story. I laughed, cried and even felt on edge from what was happening. Such a talented writer you are. If only this could be a show, damn, I'll definitely watch it. Now, I'm off to read the sequel. Kudos!

Aww why didn't she catch one of the ancient Pokémon

Oh no poor Dunsparce!

I like this book so much. It's nice and feels like a real Pokémon journey and sometimes feels like the anime too. Too bad Jaune traded his Dunsparce. It has better stats than a Raticate and a better move pool. Dunsparce can learn Roost, Glare, Drill Run and Dragon Rush and Ancient Power plus with the ability Serene Grace it can be a good Pokémon. It can be just as annoying as a Togekiss with Serene Grace.

Let's Go Eevee... *snickers*

OSCAR!

Well, if Pyrrha is a gym leader and Yang's an elite 4, what's Coco?

This was an awesome adventure! I'm glad I got around to finishing it!
I expect more adventures in the future for our silver eyed champion.

THAT WAS AWESOME! I knew Eevee would evolve!

Weiss really is the worst right now.

read everything, was blown away by the story, and will come back to this again. thank you

Wow. Just finished reading the whole thing. You have real talent, my friend.

All the characters were IC and given suitable roles and Pokémon; the battles were written and won in inventive, fun ways (that still seemed deserved - I'm looking at you, Ash); the appearances of RT members felt, admittedly, shoehorned in at times, but HOLY DUST the AH crew (AT crew?) was fantastic. I've read the 'Let's Train' chapter at least three times!

Also really liked the little touches like Allison Church and Ruby and co. playing Million Dollars But. You've set a really high bar with this - I expect more from you soon!