why the spaces after theit makes it slightly hard to read. still good though

You ruined the story when you made something that could bind harry and when you made him far weaker than god

Reader in 2020: hmmmm...
*checks * still five chapters...
*looks under a rock* not here either...
*asks the cat* *gets ignored* should've seen that coming...
*reloads page* no...
seems like it doesn't exist.

aaaaaand you ruined the story good job *slowly claps*.

This story goes so deeply, you got a realy good work on it. It's not a story you read and then you don't think on it anylonger. It's a story by which the world stand still for a moment after finishing. And you feel like waking up from a dream in witch you could have saw all the wisdom in the world, but you couldn't understand it or get it. Cause your brain can't understand it. And it never will.
This is a story you could thing about for months or years but still won't get everything.
I didn't read such a good story for months.

This is such a great story, and it pains me to see it frozen on such a cliffhanger; I do hope it is not abandonned.

UPDATE PLEASE

Its obvious that youre probably not going to continue. I was intrigued by this but, by the end of it, it felt rather stupid. Now before any of your rabid hellhounds you call your fans start complaining that I am "flaming" you. I'm not.

Even if Harry lived until the entire world died, he would still have that spark of Harry that was so prevalent in his character. He wouldn't simply give up any kind of fight... Which is exactly what your Harry did after Voldy died. He gave up everything because there was nothing to keep him human. Which may have been your intention but even Death in Spn had things he cared about, not just one thing out of a million things. Your Harry is dull and not at all intimadating, which made me hate this by the time I got to the last chapter.

evlogiménos,

Akantha Theron.

Great story. I love how you portrait Harry. Please continue soon

Alright, I kind of understand WHY you don't want to keep going on this fic. People flaming it. Pointing out plot holes. And what my response would be?

F*** them. It's YOUR fic. Not theirs. You could turn Harry into a pineapple and what could the readers do? Absolutely f***ing nothing. They could yell at you through reviews and unfavorite and unfollow. But after that, they're really out of options. So, do whatever you want. Continue the fic. Discontinue it. And the readers couldn't do a single goddamned thing about it.

I know it has been awhile since you last updated, and with my comment below, whenever you do check the reviews on this work you might find yourself laboring under the misconception that I am 'flaming' your work or some other nonsense. What I did in the review below was point out important inconsistencies that can easily be resolved. If left the way it stands, you Harry is weak, far weaker than Chuck/God and nowhere near the level of power an entity like him should, by all accounts, have.

In order for all of this to fit, mayhaps you could have Crowley and Castiel have gotten ahold of the Deathly Hallows as they were the very items that first made him Master of Death, or have gotten ahold of some of his blood or something that actually came from him and is his power. The combination of Chuck/God's powers and his own turned against him would actually be a feasible means by which to bind him rather than go from saying Chuck/God can trap but not control him to suddenly saying a small fraction of Chuck/God's powers can both trap and bind him, letting down his defenses or not.

According to your own logic, this scenario makes zero sense. Chuck and Harry, as you described them to be are complete equals, incapable of binding the other. Sure they can trap them but they cannot bind. For Harry to be bound by something that HAD to have hailed from Chuck's power is ludicrous and ill-thought out. If she had something of his as well them maybe, but considering the Apple of the Tree of Knowledge and Eve herself are made by Chuck with his powers and everything else used hails directly from him the ritual would have literally zero effect. Plus the idea that a small fraction of Chuck's power's can bind Harry who is his perfect equal with powers less spread out makes no sense.

This is amazing! I love the idea of God and Death also having a cycle. I wonder if Chuck is going to interfere soon because of this. I can't wait for when Harry will probably eventually retaliate. Please update this amazing and magnificent story soon!

I'm not sure if I've commented on here before, but I'm creating a post on tumblr for all the Harry/Death interaction fics I know or remember (just them interacting and not necessarily as a pairing, though there are some of those on my list too!), and I'd like to put this on the list. I found the way you combine the Supernatural and the HP universes very intriguing, as well as the beginning of the universe up until now.
I just wanted to let you know, and please tell me if you'd rather not have your fic recommended on the list and I'll take it off. Thank you for creating such a unique and wonderful work!

Oh come on, you can't just end it like this!