Thanks so much for the great story! A lot of fun to read :D

Cait
xx

Omg I hope you continue writing on here, your revolutionshipping stories are soooo addicting!

I love it

Oh my. This was so delightful. Excellently written!

Conversations really worked nicely here and you did a nice job reigning and letting loose Atem's hormones. Humor definitely drives the story along nicely. Thanks for sharing!

The added fun you had with the characters made for quite an entertaining chapter. I sparked a smile at the social security number and the misheard word. You definitely created an all new Atem. Thanks for sharing!

I can't wait for another chapter please asp i hate cliff hangers

Wow very hot chapter! I will definitely never tire of lemons having Anzu as the dominant one. I so loved the way she led Atem to her room and how she teased him lol. Also, the ending was priceless; I appreciate how you wrote it casual and sweet at the same time, but without the endless exchange of love confessions you usually find in this kind of stories. Very original and well thought-out.

Looking forward to more writing from you! Especially regarding 'A Taste of Apple'. ;)

Whoops! XD

Wow... Hot, intense,passionate...and demanding at least from Tea's point of view. I almost hear her voice saying "You beg", as she was making a point about the nature of their relationship: noone's gonna be the "queen" or "king"-just the two of us. She denies or avoids any signal of some posible dominant relationship. And I loved that! Go ahead, Tea! They started a duel and she's the winner!

You know what? I love the "image" of Tea on Atem's lap (hihi) Maybe I could draw something after this when we finish our project (with your permission, of course c:)

Thank you for the mention, my friend! I'm working hard on "certain image" and I'm sure you'll love it :)

Oh u finally finished
Thks a lot
Oh I loved lemon! Atem & Tea/Anzu is one of my favorite couple ever...They loved each other!
I'm reading u other project too so yeah!
Keep going!
Kisses from Brazil

That one was a good ending. I didnt even know you had it in you to do a lemon. But, you did great! TENOUTTATEN!

Well I liked the ending very much :-)
Actually I fall in love with every fic you write about this couple
But .. I think it was a rush to end this story here
Cause I was expecting more romance and so .

* sorry about my bad language because english is not my native tongue .

Yes please update! This is getting really interesting

I'm laughing so hard with Atem! If only that was true! Please update.