Living this! Please update soon!

Omg this is so good! Loving it

Awesome story so far, I love it.

Dani

Update please

Please finish this story! You are a good writer it is a shame to leave this in limbo

Is you evah comin'back? I hope all is well with you! Brightest of Blessings!

Stupid phone and fat thumbs!

There I was, waxing poetic about Edward's accursed life, and fumble-thumbs strike again!

Anway, I can just see him whining, making everyone miserable, while he threatens to "save" Bella.

Little Mr. DramaKing. Talking big and then hiding in his room or running away to pout.

I tell ya ... if I was a Twilight-style vampire, there'd be PLENTY of people on my list to take out. Why murder innocent animals?

Wow. They managed to keep stupid Edward away for six konths? Freakin' miracle. Although I can imagine it.

EVERY SINGLE DAY Edward would be ranting and raving about how horrible it was to be a vampire, while he tried to decide which ostentatious car he would drive today. Or as he stomped through the many rooms of their latest mansion, or lounged on one of many custom made couches or sofas, crying about his

That was as easy as they could make it, I guess.

That was sweet.

I hope they can trust Carmen and Eleazer to keep their mouths shut.

Love! Can’t wait to read more!

I got to thinking... You show Jasper and Bella really experiencing their lives and love, against the foil of the affectations the Cullen Dramas entail. Alice seemed more upset over Bella then the others. Maybe I'm just being harsh because Carlisle is The head of the family, coven, whatever. Compassionate Vampire so controlled he's a Doctor for humans...Is there any curbing of his coven or Deaddie? no punishment or curtailing interacting with humans? Their seemingly humane family made decisions that may have killed a whole pack of Shifters and half of a Quileute village. Killed out a whole family as far as he knows no more Swans. So what has his and Esme's corrective measures been? Or is it an "Oopsie better luck next time"?
I really dig this story looking forward to the next installment!

Really enjoying this story please continue to update it

I had to re-read the last few chapters to remember what was going on because it's been a bit since I've read this. But yikes I should've known that Bella couldn't unconsciously block Alice's visions forever. I guess that means a reunion will be coming up sooner rather than later.

Great chapter!