This speaks to me on a deep, personal level... I'm the laundress of this household and can so sympathize with Touko completely. XD I'm also a huge fan of Ferriswheelshipping, so that combined with the college ambience... I'm sold!

Sincerely hoping to see more.

I like it, maybe share some classes?

Aaaaahhh, I love this so far! It's so cute! Your characterization is absolutely perfect, and I especially liked the parts about White consistently forgetting about her laundry and N folding her clothes for her. I'm so excited to see where you go from here! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

This is great! I'm excited to see where it goes and being in college myself I totally understand the "laundry struggles" haha! I'm addicted to this ship so I'm super pumped to see something new! 3

Dialogue is written as "Hello," she said or "Hello!" she said, never "Hello." She said or "Hello." she said or "Hello," She said or "Hello" she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. In that case it's written as "Hello." She grinned, never "Hello," she grinned or "Hello," She grinned or "Hello." she grinned. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's "Hi," she said. "This is it." not "Hi," she said, "this is it." or "Hi," she said "this is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," she said, "is it." The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don't use quotation marks with thoughts.

You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it's a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you're thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.