Wow, this is a really long story to read right now, its probably really good cuz its about lacrosse but thats just to much for a lazy person like me to read, but ya, I might have read it if you spread it more, like had paragraphs and stuff. Yes, I know I'm makin no sence at all cuz if u had paragraphs it'd be even longer, but oh well. Keep writin about the good stuff, LACROSSE!

Look! It's me and I get to review first! At least I think I do...anyway. I like the story. Ducks plus lacrosse...hmm...interesting. Anyway, I like the story, I really do. See you around...umm...yeah.

-Gwen-