Thank you for continuing to write this most intersting story.
It has come a long way. This is getting very intense! I fear for Gendry's life, but I hope that you will not kill him. He is necessary for the happy ending, right?

so good ;)

Great chapter as always!

best idea ever!

Great chapter, sad that she lost her own face and name.

nice story
i m happy to read it
would love to know what will happen now.

Omg, I love this story.

Oh sh**!

Oh man, I hate Melisandre! Leave our boy alone!

I'm so glad you updated this - can't wait to read more!

In the dungeons, "... she wore a hood to cover her face, but it did not hide her figure." If she's fourteen, she shouldn't really have much of a figure. I don't know how much of a figure the average fourteen-year-old has. Sure, there's always that unicorn walking around who could fill a C or D cup, but most young teens are relatively small. Also, there was a reference to playing with the direwolves. Where is Nymeria? I know I found this story late, so the answer is probs already there...

I'm a bit weirded out with Arya's betrothal to Robyn Arryn. I get that it helps solidify the three northernmost kingdoms, but they're first cousins - it's not like they're distant relatives, or something. It's a useful way to keep her from being betrothed to Joffrey, but I have a feeling that if given the chance, he'd still beat her in court, anyway. Good start.

thanks for the update :)
good chapter

Keep writing please

Yessss I loved the bonus scene. "Bloody fucking hell". Lmao.

I have really enjoyed your story so far. I like how Arya is a combination of Sansa and herself. I am also really happy that Sandor has pledged himself to her. I hope you update soon!