What a beautiful ending..

OH THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL I CAN'T EVEN. YOU GOT ME ALL TEARY EYED WITH THAT ENDING. UGH.

Seriously this was the perfect ending to an amazing story. I love how we got updates on all of hthe characters, even her is so nice to see that everyone's lives are coming together nice and everyone is so happy. I love that Seth and Violet are happy and Seth has business and his doing well.

Yay theyy saved Darkstar and it is even doing so well they can branch out..that is awesome. And AJ has a clinic most likely and they will not have to move for her to find work.

That proposal was beautiful. So sweet. I just loved it. I am going to miss this story but I look forward to all of your new ones.

So glad to see this updated! Punk has to be with AJ!

Interesting. 4 years later would be better so flashbacks can be used. Update plz

Awe this chapter was so incredibly sweet. The last line was fine. A little bit of cheesiness is okay once in a while! I do it too. It is nice to have the feel good moment/line once in a while.

I love Seth! He is so sweet working so hard for his friends. I hope he can get the shop back up and running smoothly. It will be nice for Randy, Ashley and Phil. They need it. At least they will be in the same state... if only she had talked to Punk the last time instead of just taking off maybe they could have made it work the entire time.

I think maybe a little snippet of present day (maybe the beach party?) and a final segment in the future is how I would write it... or just four years into the future.

Great chapter.

First off, I am so sorry this review took so long. I have been meaning to do it everyday and then I just pass out or something comes up... I am sory.

This chapter was awesome (like always). Man Sara is so stubborn! I understand she is worried about her friend though. It makes complete sense. It is so funny he wouldn't leave her behind he knew there would be hell to pay.

I hope Seth can help them save the business...and Randy, finally getting a little angry at Phil, was perfect. They are coming up with some great Ideas. I can't wait for more

Love it

Great chapter. Hopefully they save it

I really hope you haven't given up on this story

Yyyyyaaayyyyyyy This idea worked and the chapter turned out awesome. I like how you didnt go into every detail...you kept it vague and gave just enough information. AJ and Punk were cute in this chapter. I think I know who he is calling

Cant wait for chapter 24

Who is he phoning

Is it Seth?

This chapter was worth the wait. Hope you update soon.

I feel like such a jerk because it took me so long to review this. Then I almost fell sleep without reviewing, again! I am such a horrible friend :(
Anyways! This chapter was amazing but, I expect nothing less from you. Your updates are ALWAYS amazing.
Randy's step dad sounds like a grade-a d-bag. I can't blame him for not wanting to call. That is not how your treat family buddy. Luckily, his mama is the one with the money so it shouldn't be a big deal...other than having to listen to that jerk rant. Geez.
Awe Punk and AJ are so cute. I think it really says something that he kept the key the shop all that time. I think he really wanted to come back it was just so vary hard for him. Anyways...I like how it seemed like Randy was going to tell him off at first (or worse) but, then he is just like I can't, it's Phil and there are hugs and talks. I can't wait to see how the girls respond to him...something tells me Ash won't be so nice. ha.

Poor Violet. There is nothing scarier than having a child go missing on you. Oh my gosh. I am so happy she found them both safe. I can't even imagine what she was feeling. She had to be terrified. Then to think she finds them and is all relieved...then some jerk has the audacity to question her...
oh well, some jerk just happens to be her brother but, still. haha.
I would have told him too. It so sweet she wast he first one besides Randy to see him... What a great reunion.
I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow that was something I waited for.
Phils reunion with Randy and violet
Can't wait for more

Nice