Update please.

I feel so skeptical about Azula and if she's playing a game or if she's really hurt. I think they both would hurt Ty Lee either way.

Azula breaking is baaaad.

I love how that first instinct of everyone is to assume Azula is faking being 7 months pregnant haha. It definitely shows just what Azula is up against in this trial. And shows why she broke like she is now.

Zuko looks weak. I mean, he is the Fire Lord and Azula is a Fire Nation citizen. He, by alright, has all the legal right to tell everyone to fuck themselves while he deals with his sister as he sees fit.

They can't execute a pregnant woman, though, right? I guess that plays into the first chapter.

Great reboot!

I love this story. It's very engrossing.

Fantastic rewrite so far. You took out a lot of confusing things and filler. I don't mind that it's shorter because it offers so much more. The plotline of Azula's trial is much more interesting than the cliche New Ozai Society threat story.

I like the budding love triangle. I also like how Azula's possible death is bringing she and Ty Lee closer together.

I like sooo much that the attempted coup was nixed and that the focus is on Azula's meek act and Ty Lee's feelings of both love and anger. It gives a lot more focus to the story.

I love how evil Azula is.

Beautiful chapter. It's funny, and I like how Azula is secretly conniving. She's so often genuinely broken, but in this one, she's taking advantage of the fact that she is crazy. Which is so Azula.

Baby shower, and an evil Azula. I love it.

This has taken an interesting twist.