Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Amazing chapter. I love how you wrote the ending with Mokuba and Seto!
-Mari.

I'm really sorry that I still haven't been able to leave a review on Amazon. I'm still stuck behind their paywall of I don't spend enough money on them to leave reviews. I am hoping when I finally save enough money for the sequel that things will change, but I'm not sure since it sounds like I need to buy several items a month or be a prime member and I don't have that kind of disposable income. Boyfriend nixed me leaving one using his account so I don't really have much else I can try.

I really hope things are successful though. It's a good story and I can't wait to see how else things change/update.

I know that has not much to do with this story, but I really wanted to alert you about that.

really annoyed you took forbidden down after all the changes you did to your book. They are different and I liked forbidden more to be honest. I wanted your oc Hunter the version of seto to end up with someone else in your book because your oc Rider the version of yami annoyed the heck out of me. but in the Forbidden fanfic I liked yami more and so the relationship was worth it to me. For some reason the main relationship between Rider and hunter just don't work.

Ok now I can say I have finally caught up with this series. Again, I really like this one but I gotta say that I love Forbidden an infinite times more.
I also bought your book on Amazon. I really want to leave a review but theres this stupid policy that says I can only make reviews after a certain amount of items have been purchase. How lame. But I will say here that I still enjoyed it and I cant help but imagine the characters to be the same from the yugioh universe. Yami/Ryder and Kaiba/Hunters interactions with each other are just so fun to read. I was surprised about the extra sexy scenes you added in yor book, too. It cuts right to the chase to get to the steamy scenes but also portrays so much of the characters personalities. I look forward to buying and reading the rest of your series. Well done!

I read this a lot faster than I probably should have, but I have this soft spot for Prideshipping and I can't help it. And then this beautiful fanfic comes along with Ouran mixed in too, with good characterization and I'm a goner. Thank you for writing this!

I finally had the funds to get the book today - I will leave a review when I am done with it. I had to do slow shipping because I'm poor, so it might be a while...but I am looking forward to it!

This story is so sweet and cute. It really follows the Ouran flavor well in that regard. Even the emotional moments have that feel to them, and I really enjoyed this chapter for that. The interaction with Mokuba turned out really well. I hope everything works out with Ian in the end- but whatever happens, I'm happy to hear about it.

Ok to be honest, I havent even read half of this fanfic . I just read the updates about when your book is going to be published. Im so excited :D Ive read Forbidden probably a dozen times and I cant wait to read how much youve extended it.

I love the little slice of normality here :) it’s a sweet balance with the normal intensity of their relationship. Also I can hardly wait to hear about the new book! Forbidden is my favorite of your fics! I can hardly wait to see how it turns out as a professionally published story!

I'm so happy that you gave us another update, I've been following this fic for ages now and I always eagerly await a new chapter! I loved this chapter! Seto and Yami are just so cute together!
Thank you for this update! I can't wait for more 3

Wah! Such a soul-fulfilling chapter!

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Ever since Forbidden I've been here reading EVERYTHING you post, even if not so regularly as I wish. I AM BEYOND GLAD THAT YOU CONTINUE POSTING AMAZING PRIDESHIPPING STORIES! I can't express how much I respect your devotion to the ygo dm fandom and will continue being here for ALL YOUR STORIES!

Another amazing chapter! Welcome back and it's okay. Schedules get hectic sometimes but hey, ten year anniversary? I wish you good luck on life things and can't wait to continue reading this as you post it.