Bunny-Cat's a D*ck.

I was about to comment that you seem to have never read "Thanks, Kyubey!", but then the ending came along and I winced.

For a time, their friendship (and perhaps romance, it's slightly ambiguous) was well put, but then the ending came roaring like a freight train and ran over this reviewer. Effective!

Thanks for writing this.

Quality story, while there were a few minor grammatical slip ups and odd phrasings (I.E. When you said, "Final burden and heaviest task" as opposed to heaviest burden and final task), your writing is really enjoyable and I'd like to see more.

This story is amazing! You captured the voices of the characters really well. I felt like this was just another episode. I had to stop everything and finish it as soon as I read the first sentence! This story isn't just acceptable, it's extraordinary. Keep up the amazing work! :D