This was the most horrific and sick torture Batman Fanfic I have ever read, yet is was also amazing at the same time. I had a difficult time reading this story. The majority of the time I was reading this I could feel my heart harming in my chest.
All the characters were written perfectly and I was happy when I found out all of the Batfam members where in this one. I was especially happy when you added Jim into the story because he is so close with Bruce and his family, especially since he watched Bruce and Dick her up. Having Jim there for Bruce as support as he had to watch this horrible ordeal was hard to read. I also love how you disscretly wrote Jim as knowing all of their secrets and who they become during the night. Jim is so essential to the Batfamily and Bruce as a friend because he is the only other outside person who can see through the bullshit, especially when it comes to Bruce. I also loved the side story about Jan and how Jason wanted to protect Jan considering what he went through when he was a kid and did not want Jan to go through with it. Having Dick and Jason save Jan and hep him from going to jail was kind of them. Dick and Jason forgiving Jan and Dick going to apologize to him and help him through what he did was nice of him considering the situation. Reading Jan’s point of view on the story and how he turned out in the end was nice to read. Reading Jans and Dick’s interactions really hit me in the feels, especially Dick’s silent apology. I love how you added humor into this story even though their is a crisis going on and theirs brothers are being hurt. I loved the way you wrote Dick and Jason’s relationship. The two of them using humor and banter in a situation like that makes sense considering how alike and dam stubborn they are.
Dick willing sacrificing himself and going through the torture to protect Jason was so noble and sweet.
Having Jason try to get Bruce and Dick to talk each other was nice of him, especially since Jason has experience with these types of things with Bruce. I just wished that you wrote what Bruce and Dick said to each other because it was an essential part to the story and the character’s development. Having Jason there for Dick and taking care of him, as well as Dick caring for him was sweet. Jason being there for Dick makes sense considering he has been through this and can handle it easier. When the two of them slept on the couch my heart melted. I felt so happy reading their brotherly bond at the end, especially when Dick dragged them to the bed. I still thought of them as brothers throughout this story because I never liked the idea of Jason and Dick being couple, I love them developing a strong brotherly bond. Jason being a big brother to Tim was sweet to read. Jason is a great big brother and can be one when he wants to be, even though most times he tries to hide his emotions. The way you wrote the plot and everyone’s internal conflict, reactions, and emotions, was extremely well written, I could clearly see and feel what was going on and connect with the characters. I absolutely loved this story and it’s definitely one of my favorite BatmanFamily Fanfics. If you wanted to I would love it if you wrote a sequel. Thanks so much for writing this amazing story, you are an extremely talented author.
~Christina

Wow, I loved this story. I only wish you had focused a chapter on the conversation between Dick and Bruce. The intensity leading up to that moment was overwhelming and a let down when I didn't get to read that scene. With that said, the story is beautifully written, had great flow, and in my mind I was imagining a DC universe/animated feature. Thank you for finishing this story!

Wonderful. Just wonderful.

im laughing so hard at the kidnappers like out of all the people they kidnapped Nightwig and Red Hood, thats some bad luck u got there xD Them not even bothering to be scared... its just too funny :D i liked this story

WHAT U DOIN TO MY BOY, HM!? YOU DONT TOUCH MY FIRST LITTLE ROBIN, BITCH
~Gangster Batman

This was so cute omg

Messed up bit of fiction but I liked the way you characterized all of them. It seemed very in character as far as my interpretation of them goes and it was an interesting side story with Jan and the various shades of gray when it comes to being good or bad.

Holy Moly, this is a hard one to read, but damn, it's so well written. You've made me laugh out loud for many minutes; you've brought me to the brink of tears and made me so angry I've clenched my jaw so hard it hurts.

I love these guys!

omg, ... "Only Dick would get kidnapped and tortured while wearing novelty underpants."

OMG! I couldn't stop laughing for a full two minutes!

OMG... I'm dying! Such a great story and so damn funny!

Thank yo for a wonderful story!
I adore the brother fluff near the end.
Jason secretly makes one hell of a brother (he just wont admit it)

ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. why so digusting! poor dick.

ah omg thats sooooo humiliating. I feel so sorry for him

wtf! omg this guy is such a creep

I really enjoyed this story. I thought everyone was perfectly in character, especially Jason. You’ve really reeled me in with the way you write him. I’m looking forward to seeing BUABS finished and will read the other story when that is complete as well. You’ve an excellent handle on Dick and Jason’s characters, and write so well. Kudos.