long winded and way too wordy. It didn't even try to stand out, felt like I've read the same plot before several times over. I wasted time that I can't get back.

I can't even tell you how much I love this story.. Not only did Dean and Roman have a love so strong that nothing could break it, but Seth found love too! I also love how you had the strong brotherly bond between the members of Shield.. I really hope you continue to make stories about the members...

okay so let me start by saying that this story was so damn good! the character development, protective Roman,i really resonated with Dean. i cried, i laughed,that extra chapter at the end was so needed. thank you so much for the storyi hope there's a sequel! (if there isn't already) lol.

This story was amazing, I have read it 2 times and have run the gambit of emotions. You are so talented 3

I'm glad I stumbled along this story,well written :D

I started to cry towards the end of his chapter...happens when you're so emotionally invested in the characters. :'(

Hey there! This story was for who-knows-long in my bookmarks, but 3 days ago I had time to read it and it was killer! Should've read long ago. Very beautifully written and my Dean-gets-beating-up-kink is fully satisfied. :D

What a Ride! I Swear i have Never read a story that had so many feels in every chapter. This is a Masterpiece

Seriously... even though Ro and Dean aint together I still get myself so wound up when he and Seth have these moments. As much as they were so close to something extreme happening i'm glad it didn't... although I don't even know if that will matter to Dean. The way you are writing this is keeping me absolutely hooked and obsessed. I've spent every spare minute I've had the last two days reading and will continue to do so until i'm finished... although frustrating this story has been amazing so far!

Roman really needs to get over Seth's looks and concentrate on what he wants... Dean! He's gonna get himself into some trouble if he doesn't watch out, and Dean is gonna have insecurities if this keeps going. Deary me.

Soooooooo we coming back to this or nah? lol

Are you there? Jessi?

I can't stop reading this fanfic .. I lost count actually
I want more from this story ! GOD
I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS FANFIC ! YOU ARE AMAZING

tbc .. PLEASE PLEASE

Oh my good poor Dean! please tell me Roman gets hin out of this quickly! please... It's breaking my heart... love your writing style