O dang

Please update soon

...what? Okaaaaay. Um...I am actually at a loss of what to say, which you should know by now doesn't happen. First off, I think this chapter was unique in it's own right and heart-wrenching plot wise, just a few mistakes though. (Grammar however, was exceptional. Most stories -with experienced authors or not- do face typos and such. )
Okay, first, the Hellhounds, you can't just make things appear out of thin air, even in books/fanfictions about magical half-human half god heroes. No. Just doesn't work. And the thing about fifteen Hellhounds. Um...no. While you are the writer, and can therefore do whatever you want, I find myself getting a little bored and somewhat disgusted when I read something so extremely far-fetched, even for a completely fictional story line.
Second, while it is true that Percy would probably do something stupid like that, you can't just make him do that and not expect us to want details. I feel like everything keeps coming back to that. You could have described his death -or the fight scene by extension- a little better. Like, 'Sweat beaded on Percy's forehead as he worked to ward off the demon dogs. He could see the rage in their eyes that burned like a blood red fire', or something along those lines. Doesn't have to exactly be like that, just... please...details. I'm literally begging you.
One last thing. Annabeth seemed a little OC. I understand she was petrified with fear and was having a moment or whatever, I just still found her to be un-Annabeth like. Otherwise, good chapter and I can't wait to read more of your story.

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Advice - don't make it so abrupt, slow it down a bit, you can make it longer by adding more details and not have too worry about keeping readers attention. Other than that it was amazing! Keep writing the story! The chapters get better and better. Love to see how you progress! :)

So good! Continue! And stop only doing them when u get so many reviews. Gosh.

Please! please! please! Update! Very good story line and im excited to see where you go with the rest of the story.

*Growling* UPDATE NOW NOW NOW NOW I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS THIS STORIES AMAZING MAYBE A LITTLE MORE DETAIL PLZ BUT STILL AMAZING YOU'RE KILLING ME PLZ WRITE MORE YOU EVEIL MONSTER RICK JUNIOR HELP ME PLZ WRITE MORE WRITE MORE I LOVE THIS STORY PLZ DONT WAIT FOR MORE REVIEWS JUST UPDATE

Please write more your fan fics are awesome and I love them

Omg! Cliffs! Please update!

Hey! Not gonna hate, this chapter was very nice. You introduced some other characters that many people are familiar with and are expecting to see in these kinds of stories.
A few things though...having Lady Aphrodite walk in and out was completely unnecessary and rather pointless. Also, this chapter went a little fast and more details instilled could have made it better. Last thing. You may have wanted to mention what happened to Nicole after Percy stopped Annabeth from punching her. That could have been a filler right there.
Like I said, not hating on it. It was very nice.

I can't wait for the update!

awesome

Awesome! Please don't leave us hanging for too long!

Please update!