Reviews for Setsuwa
Rasengan chapter 3 . 11/28/2016
Continue please!
Lala chapter 1 . 9/12/2015
Coconut cake is delicious. This was very sweet. :D
chashkieh chapter 2 . 5/27/2015
I hope you make a ficlet about Naruto's conversation with Hiashi, re: the wedding. Lol!
chashkieh chapter 3 . 5/27/2015
This was such a good read! Had a lot of fun for all the three chapters and was even smiling like an idiot. More please :)
eepps96 chapter 3 . 5/20/2015
That was a super cute and adorable story! I especially loved chapter two, but I also just love anything with Iruka and naruto. your writing skill is very top notch and the words flow easily as you read them. Hope for an update soon!
Angi sleeps chapter 3 . 4/13/2015
Aaaw that was kind of cute! I hope to read more! Oh, but in chapter two, Narutos dad is Minato, not Yamato, but still, super cute!
Ayrmed chapter 3 . 3/17/2015
Oh Naruto!
MsStampede chapter 2 . 2/5/2015
Really cute I enjoyed it a lot. Thats is personally how I always saw the whole marry someone like kushina thing. One thing though, when Kakashi talks to Naruto about knowing his parents he said Yamato, it should be Minato. Other then that I really liked it.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/4/2015
I wonder what will be Hinata's revenge! XD
TheNeedToLeave chapter 3 . 2/4/2015
LOL! This was my favorite one by far!

Naruto oh you are in big trouble !

And little Himawari is so cute "Daddy said a bad word" LOL

You are a great writer! And you keep them in character so well.

Update Soon! :)
hq chapter 3 . 2/3/2015
Good, love it,
hqhqhq chapter 2 . 2/3/2015
Cuteee
hqhqhq chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
Wooah good
Megilien chapter 3 . 2/3/2015
I've been thirsty for NH-centric, post-699/The Last/700 fic since the manga ended, so this little story was a pleasant surprise.

I do have minor nitpicky issues (like- considering Naruto's "boys need to be independent from their mothers" comment to Kaguya, I would've thought he'd be at peace re: Kushina's words - but that scene with Kakashi and Iruka was so great and nostalgic, ergo I'm good :D- also I would like to think if anything, Naruto would have used the shadow clone for his office work and the real him for Hinata? But that might just be my shipper bias talking), but on the whole, I think you're doing a good job of getting the characters' voices right (for some reason, the "oh, so that means Hinata is like dad and I'm like mum, right?" line stuck out to me because that *is* what Naruto's always done- simplify the answer at the end, even if it should technically be obvious; the "he knew he was the lucky one" thought of his; also, loved Hinata's understanding -while still getting the vibe that it wasn't easy for her nonetheless- after Naruto missed Bolt's birthday, her teasing tone in this chapter and ofc, her withering sass; it's been an old headcanon of mine that on the rare occassions she gets truly upset/irritated by smth, it'll manifest in absolutely killer comments said with a completely cheerful, ladylike face, so it was nice to see that).

The humour is a welcome addition and ,above all, I love the blend between the heartwarming NH/family moments (good to see a bit of SS and Sarada, too!) and the reminder that their world has changed and with it, the responsibilities they now have to juggle.

So thank you for sharing and I'm looking forward to more!:)
Blue-Harts chapter 3 . 2/3/2015
THIS.

I can't stop laughing. I'm gonna wake up the whole house because of this chapter!
This was amazing and I hope to see more!
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