| Reviews for After Hours |
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Claryberry22 chapter 23 . 9/11/2018 Awwww:( I literally cried! |
pattiduquesne1 chapter 1 . 5/9/2018 o am waitimg so patiently for thr nexy chapter |
Notfeelingit chapter 27 . 2/21/2018 Smut gets old. And the desperate housewives that love the threesome should go to Literotica cause there's plenty there. That threesome and their contract with Felicity never made me think of this as a romance. I never bought his supposed love for her. Sex is one thing and can often be soulless. Nothing wrong about good sex but this 3way relationship was toxic in the long run for Felicity. Why do they always resort to prostitution when genius Felicity needs money? To titillate the readers who'll give a 1000 follows to anything with kinky smut. I mean look at the least sexy love story 50 Shades. I've yet to meet one woman who honestly enjoyed that. Once u get use to the kinky stuff it just gets hohum. I wish I enjoyed this and really felt Oliver's emotional caring for Felicity but I didn't. |
Kcwritestuff chapter 16 . 11/28/2017 Wow. I’m only part way through what you’ve written so far but this is by far my favorite chapter. I’ve read a lot of smut but this is the first that really seemed to draw me in emotionally. I love your characters so much, you’ve developed them really well but this chapter just added so much more. I’m no particularly eloquent in my appraisal but I just wanted to commend you on you writing. Thanks! |
starrnobella chapter 1 . 5/11/2017 I cannot wait to see where this story is going! I'm so hooked already. I love babbling Felicity. |
Guest chapter 11 . 11/28/2016 You go you lol. Let them know who's boss. I happen to love the story and the fact that it is a threesome. It's different and that is all that matters. I love it and can't wait to read much much more. :) |
pgsca chapter 10 . 4/30/2016 You are making me insanely happy. I meant to say that a couple chapters ago but I was distracted by all the awesomeness. |
iman00 chapter 1 . 12/7/2015 How can i finish reading this its getting interesting thanks |
babyshan211 chapter 23 . 11/15/2015 Wow, I'm so disappointed in Sara, SMH:( |
babyshan211 chapter 21 . 11/15/2015 Iris has made her debut, yay, love her. Another good chapter. |
Talon5Krrde chapter 27 . 11/4/2015 Fair enough. I will look for the story there. This story in interesting. Nothing like what I was expecting from the description. Still, like your A/N comment, you can skip reviews... They are just others opinions... |
neneru chapter 26 . 10/5/2015 i don't know if you read the messengers from fanfiction because i dont if you are still using this account and i didn't know where i can write to you, but i want to tell you that i followed this story in AO3 and i love it! i'm waiting the next story i need to know what happen with oliver and felicity, they deserve a happy ending. sorry if something that i write ir wrong, english is not my lenguaje. kisses. |
merlinsaprentice chapter 27 . 9/26/2015 hi could you please post the link to your story, I love it and id like to keep reading it! |
Huge Fan chapter 27 . 9/23/2015 It's pretty sad that some people can't do anything without having a huge amount of criticism. This story is amazing so don't let anyone tell you any different. I never go on Ao3 anymore, but I'm happy to say that this story is so good that I will. Thank you for being awesome. |
Cecily Plum chapter 27 . 9/12/2015 Love the story, and, personally, you're one of my favourite writers. Can't wait to read more. |