And the clones for sex which absolutely kills any story for me. A hundred no less just to be ridiculous.

1) Seriously? She shouldnt of died in this first place. The risk bs makes no sense as does the method and finally to have such a powerful MC shift worlds and still change nothing is just annoying as hell. What's the point if you just basically force canon to play out regardless of the crossover MCs presence. Especially when far more powerful and capable then anyone else in the current world.

This and last chapter are a huge negative for what up till now was a fairly good story.

2) And now having killed those he loved off in his world instead of having them come over as almost all crossovers do even when others could be transferred over os old for me with all the stories I've read.

Yet of course for some reason the bad guys from his world have made it over too that's I feel is going to be annoying.

1) Why the heck would almost all of those missions involve seduction? Even in our world that woulsnt be necessary in the past though likely used at times but definitely not necessary for assassination.

In a world with chakra though that is very unnecessary though useful at times. Though at the same time likely very prepared for in many if not most cases. A very good reason for it being unnecessary is just genjutsu alone.

The most likely case is sending in a civilian ninja to a well guarded area or person that has a sensor that keeps all those who get near targets of interest watched. Checking them for chakra levels and informing everyone important if they ping as well as watching for jutsu activations passively.

2) I can't think of a single movie were undead could keep up with a fully speeding vehicle on the road. NOT a car in a city trying to drive around random vehicles and debris but in the open road just driving.

3) I also dont get why he hasnt just thrown a strong AoE jutsu and blew them all apart as the chased behind in a nice group to be hit. It's was said he trained and gained skills canon Naruto didnt have so I'd assume he had some.

Also sending them ahead with no clones backup with his experience is a strange mistake for him to make I think.

4) I dont understand how he would transfer "some of his chakra coils to her for her to survive. She would need a source and a system to store and such and just magically transferring his system from his body into hers makes no sense aside from some magic spell which he shouldnt have.

Now using his/kyuubis chakra to will it through her own undeveloped system which was mentioned cant expand on its own for some reason that isnt mentioned... and have her alter her own coils. Stretching and healing, destroying and rebuilding into a better network I could get.

What the crap is this transfer though?

1) Problem is with her harsh cursing of those responsible I highly doubt that the bad shit wont have collateral towards everyone else in the village.

Not to mention if this is anything like canon then without him they're all damned due to the various power houses he faces beyond just the akatsuki.

Story is an attention grabber.

Loved tthe story hope you eventually continue

Didn't you say that he had developed an immunity to poisons? how the hell did Kakashi's poison affect him?

You also said that Naruto could feel the emotions and energies of those around him, so how did Kakashi sneak up onto Naruto? this whole plot seems shaky and inconsistent. Not to mention the frankly cringey cliches of Naruto being beaten and abused for years

I was so hyped woooo dark Naruto then you made him go all fucking crying and stupid and retarded at the end smh sadface

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

So Nyx became a male and had Naruto with Kushina? This is the conclusion I'm drawing. And you referred to her/him as Mina Namikaze then as Minato Namikaze, then Mina again, that confused me too.

Watch out people this story is most likely abandoned.

Thanks for the awesome story

Also you brought in guns which might I say is just stupid. Guns are an efficient weapon to normal people, but to someone from the elemental nations with shinobi training they are useless. A chunin can already doge bullets and move fast enough that normal people couldn’t see you. A jonin to fast to see and to fast to realistically ever shoot. The guns are stupid and unnecessary.

So I’ve read ahead it’s good, but when you said that Thalia is technically his aunt is wrong. Nyx is the child of chaos who in mythology made the universe. Nyx is technically zues great grand aunt.

the prince of night story makes no sense. it's all over the place.