Aww

That was adorable

Oh man... I really loved this chapter. I got a little teary with the paintings at the end. The relationship between the two of them is amazing.

Ok, so that was really well written but my music played so perfectly to it it was amazing. I was listening in shuffle but a song from the sound track of Portal 2 came on right when they started to play when they started to surround the Dark Quort. The it picked up playing kinda fight/techno music sound in the song. It was great! But then... but THEN. The song ended abruptly and I read "hello jack." And I was like OHHH! It was so cool! Then I didn't let the next song play till the chapter was over but MAN was that cool. The part with desire was very well written, especially Jack's response to it. Very good chaper.

20 question with jack and Jamie me grinning from ear to ear

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Puppy!

I have question though are u an author? If u r what your book title i will like to buy that book..i love how you describe the situation the pain the sadness the lonely the smell of everything. It just so detail..u make one great author though i read this story for how many times i don't even remeber..every time i read the emotion still feel the same like the 1st time i read it...it just incredble

I was listening to "Superheros" by The Script while reading this and I think it fits perfectly!

please continue

wonderfully written as usual. worth the wait.

Hi! I just started to read this the other day and I’m liking it a lot (though I just don’t think a dog represents Jack very well...) Normally I don’t comment on random grammar/word/phrase errors when I’m reading fanfics in general (I would be spending way too much time on that rather than reading! Also, I can often disregard it as I am not the best at grammar my self), but I have been meaning to start doing this since there are plenty of people who write that would like to know the little mistakes they are making (though some don’t.) So as constructive criticism I would just like to tell you that in the sentence, “If they expected to see a sullen or terrified Jack when they made it to the kitchen, no one would forgive them if their hearts soared at seeing him goofing around with Sandy,” I think you need to change your phrasing to something like “no one would blame them,” “no one would hold it against them,” “they would be forgiven if,” “who would not forgive them if,” or something else like that. Unless I am confusing the intended meaning of the sentance, in which case, please completely disregard this comment. I’m not sure if you are someone who goes back and edits past chapters or not, but this could be useful advice in the future.
I’m looking forward to reading the rest of this story and I likely won’t post any more comments, but who knows! Thank you for writing this and posting it.

I just read the words 'just Jack' and flashed back to season 1 of WillGrace

I Love it Please Update

Shakespeare died in 1616 William Penn founded Pennsylvania in 1681 burges is in Pennsylvania so there is no way he could have met Shakespeare