Reviews for Three Words: Spain
Rani-Girl chapter 7 . 3/14/2015
(I don't feel like logging in...)

Aww, that was cute! Their daughters were adorable and I loved the snippet about how Mr. Karpusi/Greece tries to get around the law when it comes to his cats. I like how the girls were excited to see Romano, and the Antonia doll was precious (named after her daddy, right?). Faith and Antonio were as amusing/cute as always.

I get what you mean about character descriptions. While I do prefer the character's appearance be described, it can be boring if done right away or conflict with the image in my head if done too late. Sometimes it's better to avoid it and let the reader form their own image based on the character's actions.
Rani-Girl chapter 6 . 2/27/2015
Honestly, I'm really liking your set of short stories here. The character Faith seems pretty balanced and I liked the ring collecting (I guess you could call it that?) aspect you included a few chapters back. It was cute. Her relationship with Antonio is pretty interesting to read and I really enjoyed it.

I'm guessing you're not getting too much attention because of the stereotypical OCs stereotype plaguing fandoms in general. Well, whether it is or isn't, don't get too down about the lack of reviews or favorites/follows right now. If you keep it up, more people will eventually notice it and some of them will respond, which will attract others to read just to see what's appealing about your fanfiction. That's usually what I see happen with initially unsuccessful stories (usually).

My only suggestion regarding your stories is that you could flesh out the situations with more detail. Don't get me wrong, I like them as they are, and I'm not asking you to start writing 3,000 word stories. I just like to know more of what's going around the characters and what's going through their minds. (This is just a suggestion, not a critique; I do like each chapter as it is already). On the other hand, I'd also like to know more about Faith's background.

You did say we could also suggest three words, so here's mine: Argument, rain, cat.