Honestly Amazing !
I am speechless at how weel that was writen !
10 out of 10

God damn. I need more to this, I don't want it to end, I don't want the Dean to win in the long run. Carmilla's fortitude is very admirable, taking such a beating and ignoring her own pains to help Laura, it touches my heart every time. I really hope to see more of this, you've done an amazing job in sculpting this story and I really can't wait to see more.

The fact that Laura is being so unreasonable bothers me. It's not as if Carmilla sent the girl off to an asylum, just handed her over to professionals who would be better equipped in taking care of her than Laura and Carmilla would. It's also like Laura forgets that Carmilla is literally CENTURIES OLD, she's far more experienced in dealing with these sorts of things and her advice was logical and made sense and Laura's response is that she's being unfair? Like what the heck. Oh this is not me criticizing your writing or how you're characterizing Laura, I get that she's got a naive outlook and is overly impassioned to help individuals to the point where she doesn't look at the bigger picture, and that's a good way to characterize her to continue driving the plot of the story, I just get frustrated at innocent characters some times. Sorry for the rant! Just had to put this somewhere other than my head. XD

Hello dear author, you got a new reader and fan, please keep up the good work. S2 S2

Welcome back, as many others may have told you already xD love this story and your writing

Welcome back!
This chapter was quite adventurous and I really hope that dark and wholly solid thing is Carmilla!

This cliffhanger just- Oh my. Please continue it. Asap. I am not at all into reading, but for goodness' sake, your choice of vocabulary is extraordinary, every description from feelings to thoughts of the characters is just a pure bliss to read. I'm seriously impressed. Minor typos here and there, however it doesn't outweigh the awesomeness of this piece and I can't help but say well done anyway! Keep the great work up and I can't wait to read your next chapters~!

Oh my gooooodneeeeess. I devoured your story like I did our Christmas cake. This is so goooood. I love everything about it, from the plot, the mystery, the characters and good gosh, the angst. God, how I love the angst. You make my heart seize and beat at the same time. And that thing about that feeling with the acid is absolutely beautiful. You've put into words what we all must have felt when overcome with such emotional pain. Uuuuggghhhh I honestly hope you'll update soon because this is one heck of a work! A few minor typos here and there but nothing bad. Mighty good job on this. Thank you for sharing your talents. Have a great new year!

Still here...waiting for Carmilla to kick her mother's assume!

Wondering if lauras mum is brought up again. I'm so excited to keep reading , thank you again

Finally caught up to where I'd stopped. I love it soo much I'm so glad you're still writing it

I've read a lot of this but haven't for a while so I'm starting again. I'm so glad you have been writing all this time it's been more than a year. Thank you thank you thank you

Don't need to apologize everyone has their problems and you're welcome, I will read it till the end. Loved the angst of this chapter and I can wait for the next one. Keep up the good work ;)

Omg chapter 2 is awesome I'm doing William Blake in my English studies class, I love how you've used the contrary states to show both characters personalities!

You are back!...
This was very sad but I think it's your best chapter