| Reviews for VANISHING POINT FIRST READING |
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Braycat chapter 1 . 11/30/2002 This was great. Poor Maybe Maybe Not. I especially liked this part. "She's starting to feel invisible and everyone keeps ignoring her." Maybe Maybe Not leaps to his feet! "What's so freakin' different about that? I've been living that damn scenario since we started this hayride!" Thanks for this. |
GhostWriter25 chapter 1 . 11/30/2002 BRAVO! The over emphasis on the unappealing character traits B&B are giving to the Enterprise crew is hysterical! Not to mention the characterization of B&B themselves! This is a brilliant piece of satire and all I can say is...I wish those at "Tantamount" would read it. Great job! Thanks! |
Amy Rose chapter 1 . 11/30/2002 O.O Very disturbing... |