Well, this isn't just for one of your stories, but an over all suggestion, from what I have read, you don't use Seth much, and I think you should use him more, there are a lot of ways to go with that, and I'm not one to suggest much more. I have enjoyed all of your stories that I have read, snd I hope you keep writing

Is Seth gay in this one too
Not that I am like discriminating I am asking though

AW! Last 3 wordsso accurate!
That was awesome, you are so good at writing fluff! I suck. XD
This was such a huge roller coaster of emotions.

I love this so very much although the part about being adopted was sad it as a good way to add drama. all in all I enjoyed it.

Wow this is really wow. It's a good wow not a bad one. I loved the whole bathroom scene it was funny when vanessa was like just get out of there. She just seemed so done. I thought it was kinda weird kendra didn't know she was born when her parents were 15,18 because I've know that my Mom was 42 and my dad was 40 when the had me so that. And it's easy math to figure out. I loved this whole thing And u hope you make more chapters for it. Keep doin what ya do

It was adorable! Did not see the whole dotted thing coming.