Riddick! Please continue this story.

I agree if muse let"s you please continue !

I really liked this story. I hope you decide to continue writing it.

Interesting wrap up for part one, looking forward to seeing what trouble John and Rohvu will get into in part two.

Later.

YES, getting to Riddick and all of that fun! I'm so excited, I was worried this wouldn't have Riddick in it when you said you were gonna redo the story.

Great chapter and as always with anything Crichton and the crew of Moya do others end up dying.

Glad that this Crichton and Rovhu get to live but also incredible sad that they still can't be with the ones they love, also very typical for Crichton.

Until the next one.

So he's gonna go back in time to undo it? Classic Crichton.

Great chapter and of course John is going to use the wormhole knowledge to change history, I look forward to seeing how that's going to play out.

It only occurred to me what he was going to do, once I started reading this chapter. I completely forgot time travel was possible with wormholes until the start of this chapter jogged my memory.

Until the next one.

Oh boooy...

Whoa what a chapter, I definitely didn't see that coming (I'm hoping Crichton was hallucinating or something and that Moya, Pilot and his family really aren't dead) but you have caught my attention even more now and can't wait for the next chapter to find out what's going to happen.

Until the next one.

Welp, that's one way to start my morning, nice and emotional. I enjoyed this chapter and am glad to see this story updated, it has been one of the favorites in my waiting list ever since I read the first one and its sequel. Keep up the good work please!

That's 'Batten' down the hatches. A batten is a plank that you put over the hatch covers and clamp down to secure them from being thrown loose in a big storm. Ships pitch and roll like you wouldn't believe. Button down the hatches just sounds strange. Hatches don't have buttons.

Awesome story probably the best Farscape story I've found, really looking forward to the next update and the continuation of it.

Rovhu is a good name but I think a more fitting one would of been naming him after Elack the Leviathan that John spent something like 4 months on between seasons 3 and 4 plus the first part of season 4, that Leviathan and Pilot had done a lot for John and in the end sacrificed themselves to save him and the others on Arnessk, compared to the Leviathan he spent a few Arns on got twinned and he blew it up. But Rovhu does fit and work as well.

Well things have worked out fairly typical for the gang as Moya has to be separated from yet another offspring soon after it's birth (although under different circumstances and with a Captain far more trust worthy who wont stop working towards keeping her offspring safe and bring him back to her plus get back to his own family who is aboard her).

As if things weren't bad enough for John and his family and friends with the wormhole knowledge coming back, he was already not sleeping eating and distant from them and now he's gone (for now).

Anyway fantastic job and looking forward to the next one.

Until then.

Really great and original! Pacing, grammar, paragraphs, story line all perfect! Can't wait for the next installment, keep up the good work :)

Thanks for finally up dating this story.

Are you planing on doing more than a chapter every 3 months? at this rate it will be several years before this story is complete.

I look forward to frequent postings in the future.

Best Regards.