| Reviews for The Neutron-Vortex Rules for a Mutually Beneficial Friendship |
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SafeGuy1955 chapter 13 . 8/3/2019 Cindy is a bitch. |
SafeGuy1955 chapter 5 . 8/3/2019 I absolutely adore this story. |
SafeGuy1955 chapter 1 . 8/3/2019 I'm (like Jimmy)soooooo hurt, betrayed and disappointed. I'll never let Cindy close to my heart again. |
lmsy92 chapter 21 . 7/9/2019 BEST JIMMY NEUTRON FANFIC I'VE EVER READ. I loved the flashbacks you incorporated from old episodes, and how they evolved since the time they were kids. I loved how you balanced out all the elements in the story, from their internal conflicts, witty banter, and bitter fights to the steamy moments, and heart to hearts. And the world outside of their complex relationship. I think you caught Jimmy's perpsective very well considering he's a genius. I'm glad it wasn't all techno mumbo jumbo, but still had that air of logical reasoning and rationality to remind readersyes these are Jimmy's thoughts. Anyway I've loved this, and I look forward to reading more of them. |
woofyy chapter 21 . 6/12/2019 Im glad they finally got together after getting over their denial and stubbornness. Cindy get to go to her dream school but Jimmy decided to go to MIT instead, as suggested by Cindy earlier, even though his dream school is Calteach. I don't think that's fair but I guess Jimmy did it for Cindy so that their schools are closer together. That would be very sweet of Jimmy. Considering how smart Jimmy is, it doesn't really matter which school he goes to but I just think he deserves to go to a prestige school especially if it's his dream school. I was hoping that there would be another chapter depicting their life after college which will be about them getting engaged, or their married life together. Anyways, nice story. Good luck with your future stories. I hope you'll write more about this couple. |
woofyy chapter 17 . 6/12/2019 Wow, what a mature and wise person Liam is. He's such a nice and understanding guy. I hope he finds someone else. Im glad they broke up maturely. |
Keviin.07 chapter 21 . 9/19/2018 This was such a great story to read, I binge read it in two days can't wait to start the next one! |
PamFanJN chapter 21 . 8/18/2018 I love this fanfic. |
Guest chapter 21 . 7/5/2018 I skipped my high school graduation and went to the beach instead, and spent my whole summer tanning like a normal person |
Marauder of Our Stars chapter 5 . 6/3/2018 Dang it! Free, government paid education! It sucks right? LOL, but great story! |
Pokeshipper4life chapter 20 . 5/24/2018 Yay! After all that has happened, Jimmy and Cindy are finally together. I loved how you did the flashbacks from the stranded and king of mars episodes, which are two of my most favorite Jimmy Neutron episodes. Awesome chapter. |
Pokeshipper4life chapter 17 . 5/24/2018 Okay, I am happy that Liam broke up with Cindy, but did he have to do it so close to prom? I dont like Liam or anything, I am just wondering why he had to break up with her so close to prom night. I wonder what Jimmy will say about this, if and when he finds out. Maybe there will finally be some hope for him. And the part where Cindy was asking Libby how she knew she was in love with Sheen, I think she was asking that because she's beginning to realize she might be in love with Jimmy. Great chapter. |
Pokeshipper4life chapter 16 . 5/24/2018 Okay, I have to admit that this chapter was a bit better than the last couple ones. The part where Cindy and Liam almost had sex, and when she said she didnt want to do it again unless she knows she loves him. Umm, if I'm not mistaken, when she had sex with Jimmy the first time, she wasn't in love with him, but she had sex with him anyway. I think she is in love with Jimmy though. And I am glad that Jimmy at least finally told someone that he is in love with Cindy. |
Pokeshipper4life chapter 13 . 5/24/2018 Okay, I just have to ask this one question: How long has Cindy been with Liam? If I am not mistaken, they have only known each other for a few weeks, and he's already meeting her parents? That's a little fast if you ask me because meeting the parents of a significant other is a big deal. Ugh! I'm sorry; I like this story, I just dont like that Cindy just jumped into a relationship with a guy she hardly even knows. And plus I think her and Jimmy would be better together. I feel bad for Jimmy because he's in love with her, and didnt get the chance to tell her. |
Pokeshipper4life chapter 12 . 5/23/2018 No! This cannot be happening. I can only imagine that Jimmy is not going to have very nice things to say when he meets Liam. I actually cried when Cindy told Jimmy that she met someone. |