Awesome!

Very good.

I love this story so much, especially your interpretation of Ryou. While Yugi and Joey and the others just flat out hate Marik, Ryou takes the time to understand him. Granted, he might not have had much choice in the matter, but he didn't have to be kind to him, yet he was. I feel like he's the only one would do that for Marik-and for Bakura, for that matter. Definitely one of my favorite Tornshipping pieces ever! Keep up the great work!

Amazing! Really well written and sexy!

reread it love it

That was awesome! The end was so adorable, the candle light thing is just so cute, my heart /o/
And all the fic, it was so funny! Poor Bakura with the two trolls XDD It was beautiful, Ryou is the devil. Beautiful work, I read it twice and I'll read it again

Now that was fun! I love how Ryou not could not only feel everything, but could also fully interact with Marik. Seriously, I feel like he was the one who was actually in control of the entire situation, and because of that I probably did that creepy cheshire cat grin like 8 times when I was reading this. Oh, and I also loved how sweet it got at the end (sighs dreamily) tornshipping's great.

Shits and Giggles. -Lofty

Y'know, I never pictured Ryou as being the first to make a move for Tornshipping, but this is beautiful, especially with the role reversion of the mental pestering. And now that I think of it, it makes perfect sense that Yami Bakura would ignore/repress any potential attraction to Marik and keep his mind on revenge. And now I'm wondering whether Ryou will use his mental influence on Bakura later on to help his friends (or just piss him off) and I love it! Also, the ending is so sweet that it's probably the leading cause of diabetes in North America. Illegally cute, I love it!

wow like this a lot great job

This is spectacular! I never had such an entertaining read about a threesome but with only two physical bodies. Well done!

Loved it! Omg that was so good! See, this is why I missed you writing ygo ff.

"... Bakura couldn't allowed the hormone-induced nonsense to continue.": "allow"

How are you able to write this stuff so well? Like, holy crap man - all of your fanfics are so amazing. I didn't even consider Tornshipping a ship I could sail until I read this. You really have such amazing writing talent; it never fails to ensare me within its imaginative depths.