I can understand why you wanted to delete your first story but it's good that you didn't. It's always nice to have a reminder of how you were at the beginning. Think of it like how mangakas' styles change after a few chapters. :)

Anyway, i read it and it's not that bad. :) it has a decent plot. :)

Soooo cute!

I loved it and Im glad that everything worked out in the endxD

So... After reading almost all of your stories, I decided I should review at least one. And what better one to review than this very first piece?

Truly, the writing in this Time Changes All, is pretty bad. But that's not an insult! Rather, I see it as a mark of how much you've improved through these years, to produce the fine works that you have now (Your one-shots are delicious, and you obviously have a talent for writing hooks, and leaving the reader thirsting for more).

Seeing the improvement and changes in your writing is really inspiring. It shows that even if you're not that great when you start out, if you practice and try, you will get better. Your writing has really inspired me and I'm excited about going back to writing now!

I look forward to your future works. Good luck and keep writing! :D

Heey! I read that you understand spanish and I'm a little tired so I'll write in spanish. If you need a traslation, you only have to tell me.

Perdón, es que mi inglés es malo, está en práctica jaja.

¡Al fin terminé tu primer fic! Me tomó casi una semana por distintos motivos, pero lo terminé XD. Había estado buscando un fic viejo y el título del tuyo me llamó la atención porque justo era lo que estaba pensando en ese momento, "todo cambia con el tiempo". Encima con este final de todos terminando el colegio casi lloro (estoy en último año y me falta poco para terminar, y te juro que no quieroooo). Tengo que decirte que para ser tu primer fic, fue bastante bueno. Si hubieses leído mi primer fic, llorarías de risa o de lástima XD. Con esto se pudo ver cómo fue mejorando tu escritura, si comparamos los primeros capítulos con los finales.

Te felicito, no tenés que estar avergonzada de tu primer fic, porque es eso: tu primer fic. Sólo escribiendo vas mejorando (a mí sí que me costó eso XD).

I hope I see ya later!

XOXO

your idea of 'lack of writing capabilities' suck (no offence, i just does. this chapter was great and i enjoyed it.)

now on to the next chappie~!

you are a great writer and your stories are amazing i love reading them!

Great story! Great work! You improve a lot your writing skills through the story! Keep writing!

I started to hyperventilate a little after reading the 2nd chapter of this story. I'd skipped the first chpt since I'd read it as a oneshot just before. The difference blew my mind. I was looking forward to reading a chaptered fic by you as your shorts so far have been a joy to read.

It's nice, as a writer, to have a measuring stick, but as a budding fan I'd like to see such an interesting plot showcased to its best potential.

Hi, sorry about comenting completed story, but in chapter four you IMHO made a mistake. According to my knowledge bokken is much dangerous than shinai, so it is considered more technical complicated to fight with bokken than szinai. That means that in praktice Saito could use shinai against Misao, but bokken in fight with Kaoru. Sorry for bad English. I'm not a native speaker.

this was a really good fic! i loved it! n i loved the end where you said

"and it can be happily noted taht Kaoru never fainted ever again."

it was funny cause she was whinning throughtout the fanfic saying how many times she had indeed fainted or been knocked out, etc. lol

i loved it, n ur a very good author! hope to read more from ya soon!

EveryDay-SnowAngel

Awesome story. Congrats.

I laughed at the flashback part. It's soo cute!

"How are you going to buy candy today?"

"I can live without candy for one day."

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I'm lovin this story!

wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work...

lol, nice ending... I really like your story...