At the beginning of this chapter you had Jaden say that Aquos didn't actually appear, but that's not quite accurate. Jaden and anyone else who can see Duel Spirits (such as Chazz) would have been able to see Aquos, so for them he would have appeared. It's just to anyone who can't see Duel Spirits (which is a majority of people) it would have LOOKED like there was nothing there, but that doesn't mean Aquos isn't there, just that they can't see him. Also, I'm confused. Why is Alexis acting like her normal, nonbrain-washed self with Jaden at the end?

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

You really deviated

You just copy and pasted the Chaz and Jayden duel

I'm sorry to hear that

Again, a very well done job. Looking forward to see how well you do with the next one.

Interesting end, i enjoyed it bud.

nice ending.

Nice work. I approve of the change for the sneak attack.

...For goodness sake Crowler is trying to get Jaden out of school still! Doesn't he get at least a break since that Light BS!

Interesting turn of events indeed.

Impressive work. Looking forward to see how you've redone the next part.

Nice duel mate, though seeing White Alexis lose never fails to pain me. PM me if you'd like the details.

nice job with this and cannot wait till Jaden starts trying to date Alexis.

Great job!