So that strain on the ol' SoD from the first chapter? Yeah that's gone now. It's too out there for them to give up the 'oh we're demigods' so easily. It *should* be pretty obvious to Annabeth that the Phantom team is still holding stuff back, and they *immediately* give them everything when asked. Not some 'oh, our parents fight monsters, kinda like Danny's fight ghosts'? It's too much too soon, very OOC, and doesn't bode well for the rest of the story.

So far its compelling enough to glance at the next chapter, but there really needs to be an explanation for how Tucker and Sam got through the barrier, which blocks out mortals unless they've been let in. Skulker and Danny can be hand waved as 'ghost powers yo', but without a coherent explanation for how the mortals got into camp readers' suspension of disbelief is already strained.

Rereading this, it’s just as cool as I remember. I sincerely hope you’ll continue this - cliffhangers suck! Thank you for writing this wonderful story!

My guy come back! We wont be mad even with the three year gap!

Ahhh, so good.

what the fuck kind of cliff hanger is that. please don't end it there, it was just starting to get good

hoo vibes anyone

i wanna kahoot myself

I love this book but will you ever update it?

Please mor e

I'm a goth and I didn't know about a man covered in eyes

Nooooo, Danny! Don’t cry! And yeah, there’s going to be a whole lotta trouble... I hope that the ghosts are all going to be okay, especially if they’re being sent back to Tartarus. And this fanfiction is awesome! I hope you update again..

i would seriously rewrite this entire story if you told me where you wanted this fic to go just to see it finished i’m not kidding. absolutely obsessed

not to be THAT person but ... i swear to god if i don’t get more content soon, i’m gonna throw a fit

Also please continue if your not done with it, I am really interested to find out, hope you are still working on it though