Tf2 Engineer and female heavy

Hahaha wtf is with this shit. Fycking Juan got me in stitches.

I feel bad for Jaune, everyone likes Juan more.

HAHHAAHAHHAAHAH this is gold, appreciate the laughs author

That was great! I loved every moment.

Reading this, and seeing where RWBY is now canon-wise, it makes me feel like the show itself turned into one long nightmare... literally. This just proves that fanfiction, like yours, is much better, fun, enjoyable, and well thought out. Keep up the good work.

I was sceptical but the duel scene changed my mind completely!

How on Nirn do they know what Spanish is

I'm really hoping their hypnosis is failing and this is Jaune fucking with them all. It'd be great.

it's been a year

This gonna update or naw

please make more chapters

Please update

You're not you when you're hungry, have a Snickers, or if you're like Ruby, have a cookie

Heya buddy just wanted to say that your face are amazing! Hope you update this and stay well!

Merry Christmas by the way!

From your friendly reviwer Akashj

OH MY GOD, I asked for more Penny and you delivered! Out of all the things Penny could've done to inquire about 'love', I did NOT see her creating her own breast implants. Goddamn that was hilarious!