Wow this AU was so fun and hilarious! Quite fleshed out and believable. I just loved all the surprises you had in store for us in this. Everything is well written, straight to the point and immersive. Great ideas and no flaw in writting, this was perfect! Plus I have to admit I love the idea of that OT3. Muzet was also hilarious! Thanks for a great read D

6/5.

I wouldn't say that this story has no mistakes at all.
I can tell what's happening, but there are things that confuse me.

During your story, you tend to use present-tense verbs for the characters' actions. That puts all four wheels in the air. Stories such as this one use past-tense verbs, not present-tense.

There were times when you had just a string of dialogue with no notification of who is saying it. For example, you just slapped a whole bunch of dialogue during Mimi's voicemail. I can understand who is saying if I look at it very closely, but for other readers, I would not recommend leaving the dialogue like that.

Believe me, there are a ton of errors I could find here.

Honestly, there were too much italics on some words. I could list some more, but this review would have gone too far. Maybe as long as the 24 Hour Nürburgring track. Trust me, that is very long. I'm sorry.

Well, I can say that this story is good. I couldn't stop laughing my rear end off after reading this. The comedy is very strong and that sudden kiss though. The van scene with the Four was hilarious.

First time I've read that prose tense in a long while. No mistakes I could see, good job! Especially getting the é right. Love it when authors do it.

Storywise: Nice reimagining of everyone (Milla's school uniform is great). Surprise Gaius was fun. Milla being helpful yet still slightly clueless about some things was nice.