Just read all three chapters. Very well done and telling this from Peter's point of view really allows you to get inside his head for sure. The character, action and everything else is done very well.

So yea I'm not as well studied up on marvel as I 'am DC but I'm in for this story for sure. Also Peter is one of my favorites along side Wolverine.

Keep this up because I will be back.

this is a great story, can't wait for more.

I love how you're writing this from Peter/Spidey's viewpoint without sidelining anyone. Life sure isn't easy for him now that he's living a double life. I can tell that this tale will be an undertaking much like your DC Universe series. I'm in it all the way with these kind of stories. :)

A cool first chapter, dude. It starts off promisingly. You have the characters nailed, especially dear Peter Parker. You have a brilliant mind, and you're putting it to great use with fan fiction.

Hey, I'm a Spider-Man fan too! So you can count me in on this series that you're gonna be writing. :)

Well, looking forward to reading this. I'll be waiting. ;)

Can't wait for you to start this after reading
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