For the record, this was actually pretty nicely written.

The progression is decent, the characters believable, and the pacing is very relatable and realistic.

Errors are minimal, and the language in most instances is not vulgar and filthy, which is often taken as the path to writing intimate congress.

Really, this should be over on AdultFanFiction, as in the guidelines, there is a specific note that sexually explicit content is above the "M" rating.

Outside of that, for the most part, your stories are very pleasant to read. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Good job!

Nice story, bud :)

This is awesome! Great job!