Reviews for The Unknown Twin and The Philosopher's Stone
OnlyRoseInTheGarden chapter 1 . 4/21/2017
I'm with HEART OF THE FLAMING SEA, I need the update.
Mismatched Melody chapter 11 . 2/3/2017
FREAKIN UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP DDDDDDÄŽDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE SSSOOOOOONNN PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE I'M DYING FOR MORE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! DON'T LEAVE ME HERE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I LOVE THIS BOOK IT'S AMAZING! ! ! ! ! ! I NEED MORE! ! ! ! ! ! !
Molkat chapter 7 . 1/2/2017
People do fall forward or to the side when they faint if they fall backwards chances are that it's fake. Just wanted to let you know.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/24/2016
Just wanted to point out... that he's no longer a potter according to you, but olivander still calls him that. And he doesn't object at all, I feel that in his situation he would at least ask to be called by his new name of Carter...
17nicholasc chapter 10 . 4/6/2016
Um, it has been until 2014 and you may not read this, but I WOULD like to see a percy jackson-Harry potter crossover. It would be awesome to read it. I ALSO hope you know that this is awesome and that you are awesome. I like the fact that harry's jerk twin got sorted into slithern. KARMA! Anyhow, I hope you have a nice day!
DarkLordFluffy chapter 11 . 4/6/2016
what really?! I'm emotionally invested in the story and you are just going to rewrite it? darn.
Guest chapter 11 . 3/10/2016
Why the hell would u rewrite such a good story?!
Zebrarox chapter 6 . 1/25/2016
Luna Lovegood is actually in Ginny's year. She shouldn't actually appear in Harry's first year. Anyway I think this story has an interesting spin on things.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/18/2015
dude awesome why rewite?
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 4 . 6/3/2015
You were very nice to Hermione. Actually, as a first year, she worshipped Dumbledore. That was why she was sorted to Gryffindor rather than Ravenclaw because she wanted to be in the old house of Dumbledork.
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
Stupid Lily. She knew of James enmity towards Snape, the Death Eater, who once called her a mudblood. And what did she do? She named one of her child, Harry Severus Potter. Incredibly stupid.
Enji-Benjy chapter 7 . 5/28/2015
By 'Very Different' you actually mean 'Almost exactly the same'?

Weasley is a moron, he was in canon and you have shown him to be no different here... if your Harry thinks differently then I guess he's a moron as well.

Why were Potter and Weasley even in the bathroom in the first place? How did they know either Hermione or the Troll would be there? Ron had to be dragged along in canon and I can't see Ben wanting to help a Gryfindor, especially not one of Harry's friends, He'd want the attention fighting the troll would give him, but how did he know where to find it? Quirrell said it was in the dungeon, nowhere near where Hermione was, also how did Ben get out of the Hell without being seen given all the other Slytherins had to stay in the Hall?

Also, Luna is a year younger than Harry and Co...
KatherineDarkQueenRiddle666 chapter 11 . 5/23/2015
Please update more
Tassa09 chapter 10 . 5/22/2015
i'm a little confused about Harry's parents. They are confronted with the fact that they have a second child and make no attempt whatsoever to meet him?
obsessivereader95 chapter 10 . 5/14/2015
i think this story has its merits, and i do enjoy it. you are right about the beginning, but that's what rewrites are about. i think you should post what you already have written on this story and have an announcement that you are currently reworking the story into something different. in the end, what you write about is entirely up to you and a little thing like popular opinion isn't gonna change what you feel inspired to write. i say go for it, but maybe try to give us a little closure here, too. or just entirely scrap it so no one else gets sucked into it. i hate reading a story only to find out on the last chapter that the story's no longer with us. good luck and let us know what you decide, please!
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