No, it wasn’t proof.

so sad ughhh

well done!

Wow that was sad but I love it

loved it

Sequel?

crying SO hard...

OK... I've always loved "Loki lifts Thor's hammer" stories, but that had so much feels smashing in it too... Ouch.
Anyway, that was a really good story, and the writing was very well done. I didn't see any typos or grammatical screw ups at all, which is extremely impressive. I enjoyed reading it.

Finally... Someone understands...

Aw! DX Thor! You stupid, meany-head! XP

Oh! You know, I think you have captured one the brightest blur (and most ignored by the fans) on oh-so-perfect-and-mighty-Thor nature. Do not get me wrong, I do love the Thor-Loki bromance, oh, how I love it! But I just do not agree with the prevailing opinion that Thor this perfect older brother. If it so, the first movie just not happen! Maybe once upon a time he was close to the mark, but those days are gone for sure, once he made new friends. Which big brother sincerely believes that his younger incapable of sincerity and sees no problem with it (ie, it took the view strangers, people who do not know his brother so well how he should, for an indisputable fact. Believe in what on the surface, not trying to look deeper. Because it satisfied him). Isn't he such a nice brother? Loki so far from ideal, and always up to no good - of course only because it's in his nature. Because what could be another reason, when one is the son of glorious Odin and brother of valiant Thor? But even so Thor loves his little brother and allows him his imperfection (not everyone can be like him after all)... That's how Thor's brotherhood looks to me. In the movie The Warriors Three and Sif accused Loki of usurping the throne. And Thor believed them with no doubt. He had not even tried to find out the possible reasons for this sudden change in Loki for no more than a few days. And his apology from earlier... I also bring this kind of apology. When I going to insult, humiliate and provoke another person (we are all humans and not without sin).
As if the three days of exile prevritili it in another person! Personally I think that no matter that others, and even Loki himself, want to belive in, it's not Jane who affected on Thor so much. Three-day exile without some real learning time hardly able to change Thor's character so drastically: he was too busy by indignant at first, and later by dreaming of returning to home - even when he realized what he will have to stay for an indefinite period. And Jane was too affected by him (or new perspectives that opened for her if his words are true. She was too absorbed into all the new opportunities for the development of her theories). To me it not looks like she see Thor as a person but as a "universal key to all doors," and he see her only as a stable anchor in a strange and alien world where he was stuck on a very unfavorable conditions (she was the one person who wants to believe him when others thought he was crazy).
What really influenced Thor it's Loki's lie (which brought a new perspective on the situation). Thor finally thought about the consequences of his actions (although I do not think that Loki had planned that. Rather, he just wanted to distract Thor from the task of return home so as to have a chance to correct his own miscalculations and prove himself as worthy son to their father) Well and actions Warriors Three, Sif and Heimdall against the direct orders of not one but two kings (given their desire to bring Thor back when he was exiled and replaced them legitimate regent, I would say that they tried to stage a coup) that provoked Loki's response. Which in turn led to a situation where Thor (who grew up with the idea Asgardinas as defenders of other realms, and so on and so forth that certainly instilled certain concepts and standards that one need to comply simply because it is as it should be. And Thor always craved heroic glory to match his father. And who has heard his friends' version of events) did only what he would do anyway. The only thing that he has learned that he is not perfect. But Thor is still for looong way to find out what exactly his imperfections is. Not to mention the ways to remedy them.
I agree with thephoenixandthedragon 4ever review. Loki has all the right in the world to disavow Odin and Thor after all wrong they done to him. Especially now when Frigga is no more alive. He was not even allowed to attend the funeral. Heck! None of them did not even bother to deliver the news in person (and I have not yet knows if the guard acted on orders or on simple compassion, knowing how last queen loved her youngest one).

Thank you very much!
It's short, but so powerful.
All of these words are true.
In real Loki is a good brother, while Thor is a stupid one.

Ouch! Oh, right in the feels. Loki, so tired and so conditions unable to ever change people's perceptions of him... I actually imagine that is how he must feel sometimes in movie verse, like he's a monster because it's what's expected and because he doesn't have any other options.

Very nice. Very Very nice. Good emotion.

Wow! Sometimes you just can't get away from that moniker "God of Lies". I'm sure it was painful to Loki that he actually had to make that demonstration for Thor to believe in him.

Please continue story. Loki could defeat Thanos and then disappear. Thanos could brag before dying that he had controlled Loki's mind during Avengers and how Asguard tortured and betrayed Loki when he was innocent. Thor and Odin could be forced to admit they were wrong but Loki refuse to listen to their apologies and announce they are dead to him.