demi apa aku mewek... kakak pintar sekali bikin orang nangis.

This one was too cute for me, I can’t stop grinning! And then there was emotions and I’m stage where even only a little emotion brings me on the verge of tears, so I’m feeling some feelings over here :’)

Now I'm really crying. When it was revealed that Sabo was alive all this time, I was happy for Luffy because he still had one brother in the world...but I never saw it from Ace's side. He WOULD have expected to see Sabo on the other side, wherever they go in the afterlife, only to find out that Sabo isn't there and is still alive. And of COURSE he'd be happy, but...that means that he's the one who's left alone. Geez, I'm seriously crying at 3am. What are your stories doing to me?

I read this four in the morning and you know what? I am crying like a baby. What a way to start the morning. I always wonder how Sabo and Ace will interact if they ever met one another again. Thanks for writing this. Good luck~

My God that was a great story. I'm crying from all the feels. But the ending was fantastic and so something I can see sabo doing. Now I want to know how ace and sabo met.

Who the hell is cutting onions up in here?! Beautiful story!

very good

Damn, know I want to know how Ace and Sabo met.

Excellent, there is great depth and emotion in this. It would be rather nice if Devil Fruits could work that way in some fashion as that would help with the tragedy of Ace's death and Sabo's amnesia. Thank you for writing and posting!

...*gross sobbing in the corner*
I'd never seen that doujinshi before, so I looked it up and read it, then came to read this...nope, not okay...this is too painful for me to handle... That being said, this was really good, and had me in tears. Well done.

this was super cute and super sad and ACCEEEE AND SABO ahhhhhhhh
this was really nice thank you!

*take some tissues* I am absolutely not crying! I am not crying over a fanfiction that look like too much canon because of Ace message and Luffy's dark nightmare and Sabo is adorable as big brother. Absolutely not crying!

You are gonna tell how they met right? RIGHT? please?

So I followed your trail to the doujinshi and cried buckets. Then I read this and cried more buckets. Nnngfff. I hope my eventual ASL is even a fraction as awesome as yours xD

I think your Devil Fruit theory fits perfectly... Good job!