It sounds good so far but I'm confused. How can the coffee mug be steaming and cold at the same time? You wrote that Sakura drank out of it and then choked on the cold drink when a few sentences back you write that she accepted the steaming cup. You may need to check for more inconsistencies, and work on flow a bit more. Other than that yiu are doing fine.

cute and funny! But so confused about the dream. Please update soon

Moreeee! love it

Hi please continúe! i love your fic and all ThE moments you give me with this couple

ASKDGJSKSFJ! Love it!

Ahhhh ! Cliff hanger ! cant wait for next cp :) Please continue writting.

Omg this is so cute!
Wonder what Nozaki got...
Is it a camera? Lol probably so, I mean he would take a pic of the scenery...or him and Sakura lol
Please update soon!

It was good, as always. But, I' curious as to what it s. Please update soon_33

Ohh what's gonna happen? Loved the update but that cliff hanger though. Nozaki and Sakura are so cute together _

I love this story so far its creative and you write the characters well. Keep up the good work.

Man, crazy dreams she has.
All these chapters are good! Please write them soon!

lmfaoo! sakura tried to help nozaki and exactly when i thought she wouldnt be able to do it it turned out they're both a huge mess god bless

Tell me whatvare you planning cus' i have a big doubt about what happened to sakura after In her house. It will be love rigth? And form some reason some drama? Or gosth ? Well Im not good at english but you know i love you fic

I really like the idea of camping in this story. I bet this fiction has more Nozaki/Sakura development than the actually manga (please do. I'm desparate, lol.), but in other news Mikoshiba and Kashima interactions! They're such dorks. Keep up the great work! :D

I love this update! They are so adorkable!