Okay, that's just sweet. Octavius is a sweet-heart, he really is.
It makes sense for Jed to be traumatized by sand now, and you wrote it well. I enjoyed the fanfiction, and give it a 'bravo!'

PTSD Jed makes me sad, but good thing Octavius is around :) good fic.

Omg. This is really good :)

Aw, the ending was really cute! Nice job!