I like the idea of Taylor with Faultline. Good read, wish there was more.

aw. I wish this is continued.

Been a long time for this one, but it's awesome. Hope your muse comes back for it.

Thanks for writing!

Intetesting story, hope you. continue it.

Great story

way to end on a huge downer

Okay I think I'm in love with this story. It was a little slow to start but man did it pick up. I liked that you started the story at a different point in time rather than start with the confrontation with Lung. It makes it feel more original. keep up the good work, I hope to see a new chapter from you soon.

Ouch. I like Mouse Protector. Good story so far. Love the ability, even if it is a little broken. Looking forward to reading more.

"Colin, they didn't kill her. They got her."

Always makes me sad to hear. I'm kinda hoping that if this story ever gets continued, that she will be saved somehow.

The Mouse should be free.

They can rebuild her.
They have the tech.
The first Bionic Mouse.

Better. Stronger. Faster.
Punnier.

Plz mores soons?

wow, this is good, is there any chance for an update?

This seriously needs to be updated, it's that good. Can't wait for more!

hey this is a really cool story and I am definitely enjoying reading it. Keep up the good work and update again soon.

I really like this concept! I always thought that Faultline and her crew were kinda sidelined. Or just used for exposition and a repository for semi- important/useful characters. Good to see them get some spotlight!

Thanks for the story! I hope it updates sometime.

well, that just killed the somewhat humorous mood.