Aww, this is so cuuuute! I'm so glad River respects his views on kissing, it's pretty hard trying to get Non-aromantics to understand... Also, did you see the 2015 Christmas special? Almost exactly cemented this relationship between the two of them...
Angela

Love is a promise. Interesting to see that connected to his ring. Fantastic job!

OhMyGallifrey I have been waiting for River to show up in the eighth season! She and Twelve would be so FANTASTIC together! Brilliant fic!

Oh, you write Twelve so very well. Bravo for this one! :)

I loved it. All the running emotions and dialogue fit in time. Plus I want to see River again annnnnd I wanted to read more Twelve/ River stories, but i love this one more dearly cas its more recent in the doctors time of the series.

A wonderfully refreshing story to read. I know you said you had difficulty writing River but I'd never have guessed, I think you've done so perfectly. I really enjoyed this :)

This One-shot is, ah, stunning. River and Twelve, another wholly different dynamic. Pretty much not too engaged yet with Twelve fics, probably because he's so difficult for me to decipher; he's so closed off. With the kiss, I rather thought of Missy forcefully kissing him, like an enemy invader breaching and over-running the Doctor's borders: his personal space. I saw the panic, the revulsion in his face, then- and here, you have River repeat nearly the same action, although her motives are entirely something different.

Omg! OMG I LOVED IT! Thank you so much, this is like a thousand times better than I could have ever imagined! It's so River and so Twelve, I just... AAAH! It's so sweet! And that Dalek thing at the beginning was hilarious. Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!

I have another prompt I would love if you wrote it: Sickfic with Twelve where it seems like he's just got an ordinary flu virus and then it suddendly turns out that it's not and it goes bad. Clara needs Danny's help to find out what it is. Bonus points if you can get in Vastra, Jenny and Strax!

I always get these story ideas, but I'm just too terrible at writing to do them myself! (._.)

Aaaaaawww thats so cute oh my god