Reviews for Alpha
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII chapter 1 . 3/30/2019
Regret? Too bad there isn't medicine for that. Except maybe a good old fashioned lobotomy or rock to the skull. Won't even remember what's wrong then.
Srednasnhoj chapter 2 . 7/24/2018
Poor little Weiss, Poor little Cinder. No treat for you and further teasing of the two as Pyrrha is not going to share.
Srednasnhoj chapter 1 . 7/24/2018
Well now it was certainly a pleasure to see the two of them together like this. Kinky as heck with Pyrrha enjoying the voyeuristic side of things, but I really like how she marked her property at the end.
merendinoemiliano chapter 1 . 4/4/2018
See you soon
merendinoemiliano chapter 2 . 4/4/2018
Epic
infadinityfollower chapter 2 . 3/19/2018
Lol funny stuff
infadinityfollower chapter 1 . 3/18/2018
Good stuff
yomunot chapter 2 . 3/1/2018
oml XD
V4UL7-HUN73R chapter 2 . 2/15/2018
im really glad this wasn't cheating because that would've been a huge turn from the last chapter and i would never forgive you...
nightwind83 chapter 2 . 2/8/2018
great
Lloyd RPGFan chapter 2 . 2/8/2018
Oh man, that ending: comedy gold! It had me laughing so hard. XD
I must say, this is most certainly one of the best Arkos lemons ever written.
Bookfisher chapter 2 . 2/8/2018
Heh, Pyrrha toying with Weiss is great fun
Mindless Violence Fan chapter 2 . 2/7/2018
I applaud you for making Pyrrha and Jaune such sexual deviants, but only with each other. So many people look down on Jaune and wonder what Pyrrha sees in him. Complete trust and commitment with each other. All of Weiss' money and contacts can't buy that and Cinder can't blackmail anybody into that.

10/10 for everything. The deviant sex using Weiss room and using Cinder as a voyeur - Pyrrha is playing chess while others are playing checkers. People seriously underestimate both Pyrrha and Jaune primarily because neither are playing by other people's or society's rules.

Is there going to be a chapter where the voyeurs decide to join in? What will their role be then?
garoorar chapter 2 . 2/7/2018
Hahaha! They did it in Weiss' room!
Guest chapter 2 . 2/7/2018
Given the option to revive any story after 3 years of inactivity, this would probably be close to my last choice.
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