OK, the beginning is nice, so I'm waiting for more!

Really nice bit of odesta fluff at the beginning. Really great chapter.

i love it! yay!

I like this idea, but I can't say I'm crazy about the execution. The grammar could use another look, especially the dialogue and the tenses (some portions are in past tense, while others are in present - generally, writers try to keep to one or the other). The Finnick/Annie relationship so far seems a bit off - a bit too child/parent to feel like a healthy adult relationship, but maybe that's just me. That being said, this is an interesting idea. I'm interested to see how the Finnick/Annie relationship works out here and what role Mags plays in this story.