Okay, this was absolutely amazing! I admit, Delta talking had me thrown off, but Daniel Wales lending a hand, Mark Meltzer being saved and Sinclair aiding near the finale was all awesome! It is actually possible, considering the whole "constants and variables" Lutece theory. I say- nice work!

I loved Kayla's birthday party and all the gifts she got from her family and friends...and the cute moment between her and Alek. A wonderful ending to a great story!

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Awww! That was really great!
But Sinclair's death broke my heart...
I can't wait for Kayla's Birthday, I think the big surprise should be when an another bathysphere approaches and reveal their old friends from Rapture. And two new characters as well (spoilers from Minerva's Den).

I am not easily impressed, but this is incredible! Beautiful! Yet another piece of gold amongst the dirt I might even add this to my collection of stories worth reading.

Awesome chapter and we'll worth the wait! I loved the final battle, Kayla's reunion with her parents and siblings and her grandparents, and Colleen pummeling Sophia Lamb...not to mention the song Colleen sang...so beautiful!

Awwww!
Gil's actually a big softie for Kayla now.
I feel bad for her for killing the Alpha Series.
If one of them dies I will never forgive you! (Not really.) But yeah I'm a bit of a softie too.
The Rovers should go to Minerva's Den- as a spinoff story then they reach to Persephone.

Awesome to see Kayla in action... She's a real little powerhouse! Can't wait to see her bust through Dr. Lamb and reunite with her parents.

That was so awesome!
Poor Eleanor.
The Rovers will get themselves into trouble if the missiles hit them.

Another awesome chapter, and I loved the Battle scenes, and it was great to see the Rogers finally locate Kayla and set off to save her. Great to see the ol' Sonic Rover too.

Poor Daniel. Nicely done there!
But have you seen any Big Sister appearances?
I mean before getting to Dionysus Park she stands by the window.
And in the Park, there's another one near the piano bar in front of the window.
And don't forget Mark Meltzer!

Absolutely wonderful chapter, especially Kayla defending Delta from the Big Sister, and her defending her parents when Simon Hall insulted them. Really touching scene with Colleen's mother/daughter connection with Kayla too...I hope you can get them down to Rapture soon and save their daughter.

Oh noes! That ending!
Gracie sure was grouchy, but she's okay in the end.

Grace turned out to be so nice, and I loved the way Ranger consoled Starlight, and Hunter consoling Colleen. I hope Kayla will be okay, and she can heal Delta.

Have delta survive the blast that occurs at the end of BioShock 2 and have him join the road rovers

That was really awesome when Kayla healed Delta, and the fight scene was great too..along with Kayla's emotions and her kind heart, how she kicked the Splicer. I hope Hunter, Colleen, and the other Rovers arrive soon to save her.