Ok, I'm officially throwing any impression I had of how the story might progress out of the window, haha. xD
That was fun, I see forward to reading more.

See? :) Some points of my previous review are already more or less redundant.
Thank you for the chapter, I enjoyed it!

Well, since you asked for it (I'll have you know it's your own fault for poking my inner Grammar-Nazi; be glad she only took a quick peek xD):

I'm pretty sure it should be "DOES the demon brat HAVE a death wish?"
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"Kakashi's right EYE rose up..." (you have a double "rose" there)
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"Whoever getS him will have one hell of a time..."
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"Uh, well... What... EXACTLY happened last night?" (I guess that's what you meant)

All in all you did a very, very good job concerning spelling and grammar, though, especially given the length of the chapter. :)

As for the rest:
Since this is only the second chapter and there are already six published in total I don't know if this is already redundant, but here we go.
During the first chapter you set a serious, almost dour tone for you story, which of course only makes sense given what just happened (and I look forward to finding out how the daimyos of all people managed to crush such an amazingly strong people as the shinobi).
In the second chapter though you slipped off a bit into lackadaisically waving off Naruto sudden, obvious and drastic changes in knowledge, skill and demeanor. For shinobi, who are supposedly paranoid nutters due to their lifestyle (and especially where Jinchuriki are concerned), Naruto received rather mild responses.
I wouldn't have thought his attempted explanations would convince them so thoroughly to let it go.
It also gives a vibe of brushing the aforementioned (wand warranted) seriousness of the situation and the world off, which in turn gives your story a humorous or even cracky edge that I'm not sure you intended to be there.
If you did, please do go on as you see fit, of course; this is your story and attempting to dictate how you should write it is the furthest thing from my mind!
But if you didn't, I thought I'd mention it so that you can keep an eye on it in future chapters.

Also, while Naruto saving Iruka should indeed better his standing at least with a part of the shinobi forces (and maybe even some of the more rational civilians), everything seems to falling into place for him a bit too nicely, too conveniently, especially where Team 7 is concerned. It strikes me as a bit OOC.

So, the basic approach does make sense to me, I fell that it's just a bit too much, too soon.

I very much hope that doesn't sound too critical, I didn't mean it to! All of that is, of course, only opinion and personal taste. It's also easier to nag than to compliment, so there's that. ;)
So, I'll say it plainly, so there's no doubt: you did a good job so far and I like your story! I'll keep following it and see forward to reading the rest. :)
Have fun writing!

This is too hard to read, sorry. Everything is so jammed together that I need to make a conscious effort to distinguish who's saying what to the point where I can't even focus on the story itself. Thus there is no enjoyment in it whatsoever, simply a chore.

I like your story but it's hard to read the story when you out one massive paragraph. Also, when different character speaks, it needs to be on a different line.

Wow, it has been a very long time since the last update. I have forgotten what this was about. The spacing between paragraphs at the beginning of this chapter should be fixed.

welcome back and good luck on wherever life leads you that's a good story btw...I like the fact that the sage is there to guide naruto in his endeavors...but I wonder what's different about this timeline cause it's like kakashi knows who naruto is...like all of team 7 came back but they don't know if each other are time travelers

You need to break up your paragraphs better. When different person speaks, that should be the start of another paragraph.

Black Magi
Hokage Naruto is OP for his universe, he's stronger than Kaguya, Yeah stronger than Kaguya, He fought Momoshiki and Kinshiki which are stronger than her.
So He could easily curbstomp every opponent, no one could give him a good fight.

Time travel done fucking right. Wow this is at least a good 8 or a 9 so far. Just don't fuck up and convolute the plot too much or make Naruto so strong that he basically looks at an opponent and their heads instantly implode.

This is really good! I enjoyed reading your fic. Hope you decide to continue it! Will Naruto be found out? Will someone figure out he's from the future? Lol, and that he's actually a kage? That could be interesting. Shikamaru is smart, I bet he'd figure it out. Or Kakashi... who saw him do the hiraishin! Write more! I must know! Can't wait for the mission to wave, and the chunin exams!

I would love for you to continue, I'm pretty surprised at the lack of reviews you have received. I really enjoyed these past 4 chapters (so basically what you already done).

interesting.

Sweet please update soon :D

meant to say this first chapter. with everything i'v read so far, you've got my attention please don't stop now. this version of time travel is something i haven't read yet. *puppy eyes*