Frodo is such a little matchmaker. There are definitely some unsolved issues between Thorin and Bilbo.

I want some homemade apple pie so badly now. Poor Bilbo. Farmer Puddfoot is definitely not an honorable hobbit. It looks as if Thorin plans to rectify the situation. I just hope that he doesn't go too far and get into trouble.

Frodo sure has broken the ice. I can just envision the dwarves quarreling among themselves over a child's game of fantasy. You have made a number of grammatical mistakes, but you have a good imagination which makes your story interesting. You have done a fine job of keeping everyone in character. Well done.

I do enjoy this story but I am wondering why Bilbo was hesitant to court Thorin. And why the dwarves did show up all of a sudden to Shire and bought a house, even the King

Frodo wants Thorin and Bilbo to stay together.

I just found this story ad i absolutely love it! Frodo is so adorable. I would really like to see you continue it. I think it would be fun to see at least some of the journey. Maybe have Frodo see Rivendale and meet Beorn, that could be really fun.

Please update

Keep going, pls :D
I love This story

I think this is a very cute story and a very original concept. I personally would love to see more of it. There's some room for improvement, but the general fluffyness and the originality more than make up for that. Hope you continue the story and let me know if you ever need a beta reader or constructive reviewer. I'd love to help out, if you want to.

Please continue this, it's incredibly cute and it's a lovely way to cheer myself up when I'm having a bad day. You're really onto something here!

God, that is the cutest story I've ever read ! I really hope you will continue, it coult be so much fun !

I think you should carry on. It would be fun to follow their travel and frodo when he will explore erabor.

I hope you keep with this story! It's so cute!

More more more! I love this story so far and love to see a pregnant bilbo!

Carry on this is amazing

Otho is Bilbo's direct cousin. He's the son of Longo Baggins, who is the brother of Bungo Baggins, Who is Bilbo's father. There's no way Bilbo would only just be meeting his uncle's son because he was involved with Lobelia. Lobelia would be the one that Bilbo may be meeting for the first time.