| Reviews for Pokémon Adventures: Chronicles of Hoenn |
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   The OC maker chapter 8 . 10/29/2015 Well could be worse... It could've been a Wobbuffet! X-D |
| The OC maker chapter 4 . 10/27/2015 Nice job on the battle scene, you really did great describing the emotions Neo was going through in his first experience. Also can't wait to see Korianne's reaction when she meets their Aunt. |
| The OC maker chapter 3 . 10/26/2015 So Neo's grandfather is Giovanni and his godfather is Ethan... seems legit I guess XD |
| artgenius04 chapter 1 . 10/17/2015 Now all things are clear to me, this review will be long so please bear with it... Okay, at first, this fic will be just alike of others that I read in the past but what drew my attention is the theories mention in the summary. I thought it was a boring one but what I said after reading this? AWESOME! Well, the story was so detailed and not dismissive with such attacks like Growl. I say it was better here in battles, character development and many more. I reflected myself with Neo because we are similar in almost everything, the trait, the inner thoughts and such. I have more thing to say but I'll save it on the PM! From: Your new supportive Kohai, ArtGenius04 To: My awesome Sempai! |
| Remvis chapter 10 . 9/15/2015 Interesting background story. Now when did the dexholders end up? Find out next time on dragon ball z- I mean chronicles of hoenn. Good chapter, nice detail. Keep up the excellent work. |
| KorianneAnders chapter 10 . 9/14/2015 OoooSo We Finally Know How The Dex Holders Disappeared, Huh, I May Have An Idea Of What Might Have Happened xD Hehe I Cant Wait to Read More! :D Please Update Soon! |
| RagingKoopatroopa chapter 10 . 9/14/2015 This train has no brakes. |
| Tatopatato chapter 10 . 9/14/2015 Ohhhhh, i liked this one. Seeing so many known names in such a new light, it gives me chills. Can't wait for another! |
| Permanently Inactive chapter 10 . 9/14/2015 So some of the Dex Holders are missing and Neo has a half sister. I feel worse for Neo now considering the circumstances of his birth. Great work as usual and I wonder why the Legendary Pokemon are missing. Your fan, sonofthetrigod |
| Big Bravo chapter 9 . 9/3/2015 Oh gosh, I just love this chapter, You did really well in capturing Svet. Plus I can't believe that Colts pokemon evolved on the edge of losing. Great work. |
| crankiestnebula chapter 9 . 9/2/2015 Dude! I'm just saying this right now, the amount of strategy you put into these battles is amazing. This story by far has the most exciting battles out of any other Pokémon story that I've read keep up the good work man. |
| Tatopatato chapter 9 . 8/31/2015 I dodn't have to be there to feel on edge for that battle. Good work, and welcome back! |
| RagingKoopatroopa chapter 9 . 8/31/2015 Great job, Capt. I'm glad to see that this train is still on its rails, as well as its conductor being in good shape. |
| Permanently Inactive chapter 9 . 8/31/2015 Dude as I have said before you're fine and this chapter totally in the action department and the awkwardness of poor Colt. I know I have said this before but Colt's inability to deal with her flirting is very much how I was when I was younger and to a vaguely smaller amount even now. I was laughing through most of this chapter. Noticed one mistake in move-type though: Drill Run is ground type. I look forward to your next update but there's no rush. Your fan, sonofthetrigod |
| Martyn chapter 8 . 7/23/2015 How about the next chapter involves Neo struggling to lose weight? Can that happen? I'll be your best friend. |
