Wow, you definitely have a way with words. That was honestly the most beautiful smutfic I’ve ever read :D

This is really, really good!

Wow. This is really well written. Thank you for sharing. I hope you write more (not necessarily for this one-shot, which is a stand-alone masterpiece, but in general).

Absolutely beautiful! I loved it.

This story was so wonderful, and so vivid. I loved it, and I love your writing!

Passion is the best feeling between lovers great story as like the last

So I'd love to say that this i one of the BEST smut fic. I'm glad i was stressed and had to relieve stress by reading smut fic XD

Anyways the words dear. I just love how you narrated their actions- it is truly a wonderful piece of writing here! the way you explained and worte their surroundings and what is happening around is truly stunning! You used a lot of words here and it is truly refreshing, there's not much of repetitive words/actions.

uwu keep it up~! :D

I think this is my favorite Kataang smut of all time

Wonderful.

Wow. Just...wow. Amazing job!

So romantic... so erotic... so longing... wonderful story.

Beautifully written. Loved it. :)

"ILIKE"

Even if this is sexy, it was so beautiful to read, you have a way with words. Great job.