This was so hot and so great... you do have a way of writing the steamy stuff in a way that is not too much... it's just right and so hot... love how she told killian about their baby... hope you revisit this AU-verse again soon... :) but since it's been 3 some years since this was updated I guess not... but I absolutely love the way you write... so I'm off to read one more of your super long and super great stories... :)

this was just so amazing and I have not been able to put this down have read this in a matter of 3-4 days... whenever I have had a few minutes free time I have read this... LOVE this version of Emma and killian... will now read the last epilogue you put up here...

nooooo...bloody hell... why..everything was going so great for them... just happy that the story is finished so I can read on... LOVE this so much... can't put it down...

btw I love that you put elsa together w will... that's a new one... but really great

Loved this story and the prompts at the end! So happy that they had a boy and named him Liam :)

Another story that really enjoyed a lot well done nicely written...

I've lived on O'ahu my whole life and the first part of this chapter never fails to crack me up bc the drive from HNL to North Shore is only like 30 minutes lol

LOL. You accidentally had Regina refer to Emma as "Miss Swan" instead of "Miss Nolan"

Another incredibly well written love story for Captain Swan!

I really wish I wrote my review after I finished this story, so not every detail is fresh in my mind but my mind keeps drifting back to this story. I love how you portray them with a connection so strong from the start. Other stories I've read seem to not hold true to the characters and come off a bit cheesy but I find you get it right. And I must give you props for your attention to detail, it definitely keeps me hooked (no pun intended) as a reader. I just love your stories and I hope you continue to write more.

Hey! Sooo we never Really get to read Jealus Killian...could you please? And then the possesive smut that you do writhe perfectly ? Pleaseeee?

Awesome two prompts for Ch 17 and 18 here.

Excellent AU story. Very thorough, well written and enjoyable to read from start to finish. I see you have some add on chapters as well. I know I will enjoy them too.

Oh, what a cute addition to this story, and, as you said, at such a good time for the cannon! I'm always surprised to see additional chapters to this story, and pleasantly surprised at how much I enjoy coming back to this universe. It's such a fun, delightful story, definitely need to add to my reread list! Thank you again for the fic!

Eeeek an outtake of this beautiful ff!...and baby news my heart..i was so happy reading this and the smut though *_* never fails to be hotttt lol

that was great! Glad to see another part of this story XD