I see. This One Shot was written to criticise the HP story. I totally agree with what you have written. The security measures for the stone were a joke.

He's got a point, Harry.

Very funny

...This is exactly what would've happened tho

There you go,

I don't see why people like this so much. Its meh. If it was an actual stort with an actual set up, real bleach elements, and if this was maybe the 4th or 5th chapter after you set some shit up, it would be pretty decent. As it is, its below average.

I'm glad I found this story again. Ichigo says it all for the 'security' of Hogwarts and the cluelessness of their society. Thanks for giving Harry a big brother that will watch his back and then some.

Great!

This was pure gold. Harry's groaned 'nii-san.' was priceless, I can totally see Ichigo doing this often.

That was absolutely hilarious!This is really good

Wait...Harry is in Slytherin table?

That was so funny and awesome

So funny!

This was hilarious! Thanks for writing this, it gave me quite a few laughs.

i would very much like to adopt this story, if it weren't for the fact that i need a huge amount of improvement in writing... but who knows maybe i'll adopt it though..