Reviews for Walking It Off
DancerDragonRL chapter 13 . 3/10
OMT
I LOVE THIS
Its amazing... truly, i have been ready fanfics and it inspired me to make my own fanfic on watpad ( its called Keep Going) and honestly its amazing, this stared so suddenly, and finished alsmot the way it started. I loved the ruff and tuff bits too. I loved all of it.
Its 2020 now, but it is still awesome
Thank you xx
htvhtgjtdhzr chapter 13 . 1/2
this is cool... now can u finish the other one?
astridsrage chapter 5 . 8/2/2019
ok I love how she beat up snotlout but now that makes hiccup look extra wimpy and weak truthfully and I would feel the same way if it was hiccup beating up snot for astrid….they should fight theirown battles
astridsrage chapter 3 . 8/2/2019
yeah I definitely know what it is like to have THAT teacher I mean she would have pure venom in her voice if someone even looked away from her and if you corrected her then you may think you were gonna die and yes i know that nobody likes to be corrected especially teachers but you don't want her to tell ppl the wrong thing. And of course she had her pets that could get away with murder and always chose them.
Guest chapter 13 . 2/18/2019
To be honest, not impressed by this ending.

She had 1 week to do something, and she just up and vanished? And he didn't contact her at all? That's not normal.

And 4 years... That is just a knife twist. I hate it when authors pull stunts like this. News flash, it can be a gut punch for your viewers. Authors do this kind of thing way to often, it's like toying with your audience.
Crimson Daydreamer chapter 12 . 1/17/2019
Hey! So I just started reading this fic this morning and I have already finished it! And I know it isn’t finished but that’s okay! It’s really well written and I love the development of Hiccup and Astrid’s relationship and the characterisation is really on point! I’ve been looking for a good Hiccstrid fic for ages and I’m so happy I found this one! No pressure on finishing it, we all have crazy lives I know but just know that if you ever do I’ll be one of the first to read it!
nightfury355 chapter 12 . 1/1/2019
Ok yeah this is by far one of the most captivating hiccstrids ini a while. Ini reading this in Jan 1, and you last updated at march. Please update sooner:(
Guest chapter 7 . 12/31/2018
Thank you so much for the gift of all of these puns like I can't even tell you but these made my upcoming week:)
Hiccup chapter 12 . 12/30/2018
Please update, it's a good story I noticed that you did curse in this chapter.
Hiccupinreallife chapter 4 . 12/29/2018
That teacher sounds like my math teacher, my English teacher, and my art teacher.
Unlimitedfangirl chapter 10 . 10/4/2018
The way you wrote that last part about Astrid was abosulutely brilliant. I was gobsmacked at how beautiful and powerful it was. Amazing work!
Guest chapter 12 . 7/20/2018
I feel for astrid I had to go through the same thing
My dad left my mum was distant never talked to me I had to get a job when I was thirteen when I got to school I only had Jessica but she couldn't make me smile anymore than when I thought I should just die it was freshman prom Jessica gave me a blue dress (it was more like a skirt and a 3 quarter top) and a leather jacket with a black fluffy hood and I wore that with blue converses but 2 weeks before that a boy named ty (Tyler) asked me out he was the most popular guy and I was the ugly pore kid but he said I was butifull with my blood hair hazelnut eyes he said I was butifull over ( even my boyish frame) we went to prom we ended up at his house (manshin) and we had dealings he took my virginity but one month later my mum said the house was sold but I never knew it was up for sale.
I said I refuse to leave that I finally had a boyfriend and I had knew friends but she didn't care and said we were going to Miami where my cousins are and I said that's on the other side of the world literally but she wouldn't take and said start packing I ran to the beach and determined if I should drown myself but ty's place is at the beach and he was working his dog bella he saw me and came running up to me when I was about to jump of a big rock into the sea he held me back and asked what was happening and why I was about to jump into the 3 degree water in only a shirt and jeans we went to the swigs why bella (the Dog) played in the warter I told him what had happened his face went through lots of emotions and then it landed on sad he got of the swings turned around to me bent down and hugged me he said I could live with him in an impartment because he was looking at some for year 11 and I was 17 and Its my life and my own businesses but I ended up going to Miami for a mother but ty promised to wait for me and he did my mum stayed in Miami but I came back to tassie Australia and I moved in with the weight stayed together and we still are we are only 19 now but who cares we love each other
That's my story so I know how astrid feels

Jessie Gavlik
Guest chapter 3 . 7/19/2018
I know the feeling once my teacher tricked me
The test paper said sixteen but when I got my report card it said 91
JChttyd chapter 12 . 4/24/2018
Please continue! I really love this story and I want to know what happens next! :)
nightfury2006 chapter 8 . 4/15/2018
about the wedding Vikings usually sacrifice a cow two sheep and five chickens don't know if it helps but ye
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