Woahhh , Ciel is definitely insane good thing Edward was there to stop what he's trying to do. I was shocked when he did that to her goodness! Anyway I think this most likely another alternate story of yours than a sequel hehehe .I hope you'll do more?

Even if your english is not your 1st language this is still good! You made me cry so much my is like I also felt what the patients felt , as u said in tour author's notes. Thank you for making this!

Oh yes I understand your reason and in Victorian times people doesn't have much medicine to offer.

OH MYYYYY LIZZZY! *cries poor Ciel I hope he does not go into insanity .

Oh my...it is hard to accept that a loved one died even more so if there's a fight that happens between the two persons like what happened in your story. I'm really worried about Ciel , he's getting obssessive sometumes then turns into depression it makes me cry and I want to hug him saying it's not his fault.

Woahh I'm scared on the next chapter now, Ciel's too dark and violent but I'll still read the next chap.

This was truly amazing! OMG both endings are great and I like that you added second one.

i love it .

So this is an alternative ending right?
But it seems like you're still playing the whole Ciel goes nuts kind of thing.
Will there ever be a chance for both of them to have a happy ending? Please?

That's it!? So he just goes crazy? Woah, like wtf.
I really didn't think you were going down that road but all in all, I really liked it.
Thank you for posting such a good story!
It really got me crying! So GOOOD.

Okay you did it, you killed me. I love love Tanaka! God why are you so good at this!?

I really like how you included Lizzy's dad in here. Hes always this comical character so it was nice to see another side of him!

Oh what the hell!? I was so sure you were going to get Lizzy to wake up and they'll straighten things out! I didn't think you would kill her! THe feels!

You know you should have titled this chapter breathe cuz you mentioned it so much. But i love it! I kind of wish you put Sebastian in more though.

Oooh, there's been an accident. Well, it's always a carriage accident involving Lizzy but I like how you went the extra step to talk about Ciel's anger! Keep updating please!